tears be
the balm
of the badly
bruised, beating
heart.
faith be
the calm
of the noisy,
full of fear
mind.
hope be
the song
of the silenced,
hunched, inner
hole.
Him be
the strong
of the weak
surrendering,
soul.
I write because I read. I read because I write.
tears be
the balm
of the badly
bruised, beating
heart.
faith be
the calm
of the noisy,
full of fear
mind.
hope be
the song
of the silenced,
hunched, inner
hole.
Him be
the strong
of the weak
surrendering,
soul.
Wow..i am.so glad you responded so well…congratulations..
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aww. thank you. it’s like my reminder to myself on how i can move forward. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautiful beginning. 💕💕💕
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awww. thank you, love. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Love this so very much!!
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awww. thank you, Sheridan! how have you been?
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Girl, I’ve been so very busy and missed all of this amazing writing!
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awww. it;s okay. i missed reading your blog too. i read the latest and it left me crying. ❤ ❤ ❤
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You’re here, you’re here, yay! And what a start to the prompts ❤️❤️❤️ With your soul and kindness heart filled with all that love, youwill definitely emerge a winner. I’m so proud of you 😘😘😘
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awww. yes i am here. 😀 😀 😀 and thank you dear. i am chanting this poem myself. i hope i can inhale this haha
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Excellent beginning to the poem Rosema. The pace and way you have set out the poem gives the feeling of climbing a steep set of stairs.
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thank you so much. i have been waiting for a comment like this. you just spoiled me a bit more. hehe. thank you, Davy!
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No spoiling Rosema, just the thoughts of an honest reader of your excellent poetry 🙂
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yeah. reader indeed. you are the exact definition of that word, Davy.
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Can’t help but notice that you’ve managed to arrange your poems in a series of stairs. Intentional or no? 😀 Regardless – on some days, we can dream big. On other days, it’s just trying to make your way up the stairwell to something more beautiful. But no matter what, I’m sure you’ll succeed!
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Yeaaaa! You got clear eyes, Chris! I intentionally want to form stairs. Hehe. And thank you for another lovely comment. You’re epic!
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It was a very nice touch! Definitely suited the poem to a tee. And – no, you’re the epic one ^_^
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aww. you’re too kind! thank you!
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wow. this one is epic. Struggle on girl!
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trying. ❤ trying ❤
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Amen.. ❤ An inspiring piece that we all need today dearie..
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❤ ❤ ❤ working on this, dearie! ❤
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Great job on this as well! You did a beautiful poem.
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aww. thank you, Mandi!
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Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow! You said what I’ve experienced too, and so eloquently!
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awww. thank you sissy. i am trying to do this. ❤
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Moving forward can be hard and tricky–but you are Never Alone ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ amen sissy. its hard. so hard. ❤
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I know Sweetheart, I know–but you’re young, you’ll get there alright, with His help ❤
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aww. yes. i should listen to my sissy. ❤ ❤ ❤ amen! ❤
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Just remember that I, too, have gone off the Path more times than I can count–but the Shepherd, Our Lord, is faithful to come get us and carry us back to His throne room, Every Time ❤
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awww. amen. amen. you are a living testimony. ❤
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Yes, and lots of pastors speak of God turning our “scars” into “stars” ❤
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awwww. how lovely is that! ❤ ❤ ❤
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It helps…when you’re in the right space to hear it…if you’re hopeless, it falls flat!
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so true!!!!
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🙂 🙂
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Beautifully written!
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thank you dear! ❤
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🙂
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Wonderful poem to kick off NaPoWriMo!
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aww. thank you, Jade! ❤
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