I asked my mom this morning about the almost burnt painting I saw last week in our attic. Its main subject is a woman dressed in glamor and elegance. She looked like me and my mommy but I am quite sure she is not my granny.
To my surprise, mom turned pale and then sad and then angry. “I thought I was able to throw it. Don’t touch it again,” she said.
I stared and waited for more. Sighing, she continued.
“She’s your granny’s mom. The man and the girl were your granny’s dad and sister. She burned their house and killed all including herself because of jealousy. Your granny and that painting are the only survivors of that fire.”
I am smiling right now cos i ‘ve read the posts of the others on the same prompt which are mostly calm, serene, romantic by feeling..
And here you are with you morbid (i’d like to call it that way) version of the prompt..hehehe you never failed to amaze me..
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HAHAHA! Morbid. (hiding) Exactly. HAHA. I tried to do away with the calm and romance so ta dah!!! 😀 😀 😀
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😨😨😨😨…
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hhehhe ❤ ❤ ❤
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Ah ha! She returns 😁😁 I was wondering when will these posts pop up 😂😂
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HAHAHAHAHA! Yea. The morbid writer wakes up! HAHAHA
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Whoa that escalated quickly 😉
Great story. So different from the other prompt responses. 😊
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hehe. thank you, Shweta! ❤
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Now that was a nice twist.
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YAY! 😀 Thank you, love! 😀
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Always!
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i hope you and your little man are getting better now. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thanks, we’re getting there.
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yay! ❤
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OMG! A dark, but good take.
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thank you, Reena! ❤
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Delightfully different! Well done.
My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’
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Thank you! 🙂 I appreciate it, Keith! ❤
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And the fire continues into the writing Rosema. A full book in 120 words. Excellent.
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“A full book in 120 words.” WOW! What a feedback, Davy! (humbled. humbled. <3)
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reminds of the evil in flowers in the attic, never knew you had such morbid thoughts as mich says!! but a good tale, agree with Davy its almost like a mini book, all components complete.
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ooooooh. thank you so much, Gina. a confession. most of my early poems and fictions are morbid. HAHA
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you dont seem the type though, too sweet and lovely!
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hehe. but i don’t know. i got daaaark things on my mind. HAHA
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i imagine all sorts too – with potions and spells!
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oh the fantasy part isn’t my forte. 😀 :D:D
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So chilling with such a dismal ending! Sounds like her great granny was mentally ill! Great story Rosey!
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oh i think so too!! 😀 😀 😀 Thank you dear PJ! ❤
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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wow. I did not see that coming!
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hehe. (the death toll? :D)
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Ooooh, I wonder if this is the beginning of a haunted painting story? Loved your dark take on the prompt, Rosema!
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ooooh. maybe? HAHA. but i dropped the secret already. -_-
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Oh my gosh. At first I thought that this was for real. Then I saw the ‘flash fiction’ thing at the bottom. Phew! Hahaha
How are you Rosema? I know I’ve been so absent this week. It’s because I’ve been taking a course and haven’t had any time. Glad I was able to visit you briefly before heading up to the course.
Have a great day.
🙂 ❤
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Yes dear. Fiction. Hehe. I am good. Been active here lately because work is kind of calm. 🙂
How are you? May you share what course are you taking? 🙂 You have a great Friday dear! ❤
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I am well, thank you Rosema.
The course I was taking was a course on World View. Pretty heavy topic and not one that you can study just within a week’s time, but it was a great course. I love all that sociology stuff and all.
Hope you are well.
🙂 ❤
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ooooh. that’s interesting! Sending power hugs for another week, Staci! 🙂
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🙂 ❤
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Arrestingly dark. Inasmuch as I enjoy the romantic pieces, I like that you throw in a mix of pain, misunderstanding, and mystery. More please. ❤
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er. haha. i am not so good in writing more. -_- hehe. thank you darling Lonna!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Hehe…you’re too humble my dear. ❤
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no. honest! 😀
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Wow, quite a family secret to keep in the attic!
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you put that so well, Iain! ❤ Thank you! ❤
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Very well written! What a secret, though!
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hehe. i agree! Thank you Muse!
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You’re most welcome, Rosema. 🙂
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❤
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Loved how you turned the prompt in side out.
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aww. thank you, Michael! (P.S. I cannot seem to find your website link. May you please share it? Thank you!)
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Hi Rosemawrites – I am not very technical when it comes to computers, but will look into the lost link. My website can be found at http://www.michaelhumphris.co.uk
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There! Thank you, Michael! 🙂 And it’s Rosema or Rosey. 🙂
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Thank’s Rosema
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thank you, too! 😀
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