dust and meteoroid collide
atmosphere sparks in light
scarlet red, to bright yellow
then to a quick white,
a meteor fall.
in-awe brown eyes stare high
then faces turn, exchanged tensed sigh
cheeks blush in pink
closer and closer in less a minute,
black night burns to hot red.
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03.17.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to dVerse‘s Meet the Bar with impressionism by 
Björn Rudberg (brudberg).
A Reading Writer 
oh the passion simmering here is amazing, starting slow and building with the colours till it turns red hot – lovely!
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awww! love the “passion simmering!”. I don’t know why it took such a “hot” turn. (hiding face) thank you, Gi! ❤
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spring fever Rosie? or is your muse ever so lovely to you recently? either way your poetry is really lovely. Dont’ hide I am shyly peeking at you too Rosie!
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er. i dunno. it’s summer here in the Philippines. (we’re neighbors). maybe the hot weather is to blame! HAHA
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yes it might be the heat! but we have been having thunderstorms lately and those inspire me very much!
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oh? thunderstorms? is it rainy season in Malaysia?
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Yes Rosie, but its not supposed to be, it should be between monsoons now, but the weather is really crazy these days, so lots of thunderstorms.
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i agree. March should have been so hot hot hot here but nights are still kind of cold. Weather is getting weirder.
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yes it should be here too! it is a crazy weather pattern we are seeing.
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i agree. sigh. be safe! 🙂
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you too honey!
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Steamy poem! Very fun to read. By the way, it’s freezing here in NY as we move into spring.
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awww. steamy. (hiding) hehe. thank you, Gilda! ❤
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Always welcome!❤
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❤
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Oh boy! The weather just got hotter😉😉
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hehe. (blushes) (hiding)
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Aww, why are you hiding? 🙂 *hugs*
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because. hehe. 😀
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One can only watch those meteors fall for so long. I liked the colorful transition from black sky to hot red.
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aww. thank you, Frank!
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Passion burns through these excellent words Rosema. The temperatures gone to sizzling reading this 🙂
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uh oh. (hiding face hehe) thank you, Davy! 😀 got to write something cold to balance it out? haha
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🙂
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The season is finally changing here, too, towards warmer weather. Ahhh spring. Blooms, allergies, and the pool parties. Haha…I love the combination of colors, which illicit so much emotions in this lovely, lovely poem. I love the peace of dusk, but relish in the hopefulness of dawn.
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“I love the peace of dusk, but relish in the hopefulness of dawn.” this is poetry itself dear Lonna!!! arrrrgh! soooo good! Thank you!!!
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Feel free to quote me anytime! I feel so special when you do. Hehehe <3<3
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hehe. i will. i willlll! 😀 😀 😀
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The passion in these words! ❤
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awww. thank you!
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This poem splashes color, my friend. I especially like the blush pink cheeks. Paints a sweet picture.
Have a wonderful weekend Rosema.
🙂 ❤
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awww. splashes color! Hooow beautiful is that dear Staci! Thank youuuu! have a great week ahead!
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😘💕
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I like that you took us into the cosmos and back again in this, with the use of color so effective to create the sense of impressionism.
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awww. thank you, Ma’am! ❤
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Ah, the world in a moment!
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hehe. i agree. thank you!
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What a fun read! From cosmos to black sky red hot! Good trip.
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awww. thank you, Ma’am!
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closer and closer in less a minute,
black night burns to hot red.
Shooting stars can be mesmerizing! It brings luck it seems!
Hank
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awwww. thank you, Hank! yes i think so too!
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i can see a lovely sky 🙂
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aww. thank you!
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Ooohhh i can feel the passion crossing through from one syllable to the other…one hot poem rosy..!!!
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hehe. yea. so hot. (hiding now) thank you for reading dear Mich!
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As above, so below. The colours tell their own story…
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aww. yes. thank you!
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This evokes the same sense as starry night by Van Gogh
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oh daaaamn! that;s such a compliment! wow. thank youuu, Bjorn!
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Meteor falling and kindling passionate sparks !
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awww. thank you, Grace! ❤
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Loving the sparks flying from the heavens!
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aww. thank you!
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Hmmm…sparks flying everywhere here 😉
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hehe. i agree. 😀 thank you, Paul!
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Always welcome!❤
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Oooh love the usage of color here 🙂
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hehe. thank you dear Jade!
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