dust and meteoroid collide
atmosphere sparks in light
scarlet red, to bright yellow
then to a quick white,
a meteor fall.

in-awe brown eyes stare high
then faces turn, exchanged tensed sigh
cheeks blush in pink
closer and closer in less a minute,
black night burns to hot red.

©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash

In response to dVerse‘s Meet the Bar with impressionism by Björn Rudberg (brudberg).


59 thoughts on “Cosmos”

  1. The season is finally changing here, too, towards warmer weather. Ahhh spring. Blooms, allergies, and the pool parties. Haha…I love the combination of colors, which illicit so much emotions in this lovely, lovely poem. I love the peace of dusk, but relish in the hopefulness of dawn.

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