The cracks of the breaking dried twigs and leaves tell me I am in the middle of a lush forest. Blindfolded, I can hear the loud cracking sound echoing with my racing heartbeats filled with excitement and fear.
I grip his sweaty hand, harder. He squeezed my hands back to assure me that I am safe. I cling to him until he let my hand go so he can remove my blindfold.
The silk cloth drapes slowly away from my eyes to reveal his surprise– the older yet still familiar Volkswagen Beetle, the silent witness of our 14-year-old first kiss.
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Word count: 100
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Tim Livingstone
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) March 14, 2017. 
A Reading Writer 
As always Rose…this brings a smile in my heart..😙
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awww. glad to do just that, Mich! ❤
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I loved this Rosey! It is wonderful. Loved the last line — silent witness of our 14 year old kiss. Wonderful! Just wanted to remind you to link your story up to the InLinkz Story Board so the others can read your story too.
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hehe. thank you dear PJ! something sweet and not morbid! 😀 and i just did. 😉
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It was wonderful Rosey! I loved your story!
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awwww. thank youuu, PJ! I missed doing this!
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I’m happy you are back!
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me too! ❤
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Aww ❤️❤️❤️
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hehe. cheesy, eh? 😀
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No, no. It’s cute 😊😘
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hehe. thank youuu! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Muah 😘 You are most welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Warm and uplifting Rosema 🙂
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aww. thank you, Davy!
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Awww Rosema you always know how to add a little sweet romance to your words!
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Aw, cute story Rosema, a wonderful surprise 🙂
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Oh, that’s adorable! And more amazing they found it after so many years.
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i agree! Thank you! ❤
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So sweeeet! Love the twist in the story. ❤ Great job, Rosema. ❤
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awww. thank you dear Funsie! ❤
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Always my pleasure dear 😂
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aww. how are youuuu???
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Not very well lately. My little is sick. I have to look after her and now we are both sick 😷
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ugggh. get well soooooon to you and to your little one. < 3
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Thank you, my dear. We are on the road to recovery. ❤
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oh wow. thank you Lord! ❤
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Great twist – I was fearing the worst to start with, then it turned into a sweet romance, excellent 🙂
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hehe. that’s my goal. thank you, Iain!
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Gaaaa! Yes! Superb! Sublime! Beautiful! ❤ ❤
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awwww. thank you, dear one!
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You’re welcome Rosema! ^^
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❤
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I to feared the worst, glad everything worked out alright.
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yes. 🙂 thank you!
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Very Sweet and nicely told Rosie:)
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aww. thank you!
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Heartwarming, delightful. Love it.
Click to read my story
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thank you!
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Awesome story! I experienced a full range of emotions: I was uncertain, then anxious and fearful, and finally joyful!
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yay! thank you for capturing what i tried to tell, Kay! thank you!
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i thought I had posted a comment when your flash appeared in my reader but this week has been a little crazy I might be confused. I loved the build up of excitement and the sounds and the hand on her back telling her she was safe, lovely to re visit their first kiss, so sweet and romantic for him to remember and bring her here. Lovely my dear!
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awwww. thank you dear! It’s okay. 🙂 ❤
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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thank you for the reblogs my friend!
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Anytime 🙂
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