He is
clothe in fragrant scent
leaking out of fresh, budding
blooms,
his aura is
bathe in blinding golden rays
lighting up a fully packed
room,
each step he takes towards
me are lilting,
yes, he is my harbinger of
spring.
Oh, I’m melting.
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Beautiful words and flow, as ever, Rosema. I am reading this with the sun flooding through the poetry den window. These words have helped Spring come in a little faster 🙂
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awwww. thank you for sharing me the view from the poetry den! Glad to send some springy sunshine your way! 🙂
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Always received with gratitude Rosema 🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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awww. thank you, Funsie! ❤
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Always, my dear. ❤
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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so much beauty he has outwardly and also the feelings he is evoking in her as he approaches! truly lovely Rosema!
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awww. you got it so right dear! Thank youuuu! ❤
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So sweet! 🙂
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for a change, PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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LOL! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Aaww you do write beautifully Rosema.
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awww. you are always so kind. thank you! ❤
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Always my pleasure dear.
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Beautiful! ❤
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Ohhhhh Rosema, this is so lovely. I’d never heard of this type of poetry form. I think I’ll try one out myself even.
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awwww. i would love to read yours, Staci! ❤
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And I’m melting as well ❤
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awwwe. happy to return the favor! ❤
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I liked the description of him in terms of his aura.
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thank you! 🙂
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The sense of melting is wonderful.. you brought it all forth.. the sense of falling in love.
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aww. thank you, Bjorn!
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Ooh, this is so bright and warm it’s melting as I read it!
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awwww. thank you!
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Oh this is soo unbelievably beautiful! ❤️
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awww. thank you, Sanaa!
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It’s Spring, and all God’s creatures are searching for mates! Beautiful description of the first stirrings of love!
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hehe. thank you, Beverly! 🙂
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Oh my! I’m melting as well 😁❤️❤️❤️
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hehe. don’t. don;t. i need you here! 😀
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Heehee, I’m not going anywhere 😘😘
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i am so clingy 😀
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Haha, no you’re not 😀
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😀 😀 😀
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Nice! ❤
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aww. thank you, Joss!
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Nature’s inspiration manifest in human form?
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yes. 🙂 thank you, Paul!
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[…] a poetry form. I had to give my try at this quadrille after reading a fellow bloggers post over at A Reader Writr. The poem is in response to a prompt over at […]
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Nice…I am melting with you, smiles !
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awww. thank you, Grace! ❤
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