I heard your soul’s sighs
and your heart’s cries
as your mind tries
to silence fear of ends and byes.
So I stamped the wind with
my love’s breathing whispers,
crossing 2,000 miles of seas and lands,
to bring my kiss of forever.
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01.17.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to dVerse‘s Quadrille #24 with the word “whisper” by De of 
whimsygizmo.
Just write a poem of precisely 44 words, including the word whisper.
A Reading Writer 
Lovely Rosema, and chilling too
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awww. thank you!
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Of course 🙂
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“So I stamped the wind with
my love’s breathing whispers”
Oh, my. That’s just too gorgeous.
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awww. thank you so much! that means a lot coming from you dear. ❤
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Lovely! 😉
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thank you! 😀
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My pleasure. It’s such a stunning poem.
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thank you, Kay!
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The last stanza is divine and filled with fierce love!!!
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awww. thank you so much, Grace!
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Great quadrille. I especially like the rhyming in the first stanza.
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thank you, Maria! 🙂
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Achingly beautiful, Rose. We all seek forever love!
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aww. i cannot agree more. ❤ thank you for reading, Lynn!
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That sounds exquisite 🙂
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awww. thank you, Jacq!
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I love how you stamped the wind. Very breathtaking images you created.
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aww. thank you, Victoria! 🙂
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“I stamped the wind with
my love’s breathing whispers”
I really like that.
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awww. thank you, Iris! 😀
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This was so pretty Rosema! Crossing the elements that prevent us from touching one another.
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awww. thank you dear! 😀
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Too sweet, dearie!!! Now it’s my time to melt! <3<3<3
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awww. hehe. love is in the air may be! 😀
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Hey! You don’t plan on leaving me hanging (and melting) right? Haha. Your nosy friend needs to know… ❤
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HAHAHAHA. You will. You will. 😀
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Love that fear in the first stanza (the rhymes work perfectly) – and the resolution crossing oceans,
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thank you, Bjorn! 🙂
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Another excellent piece Rosema evoking strong thoughts and images.
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aww. thank you, Davy!
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Reminds me of the quests of a lover to rescue his beloved in a fairy tale. Nicely done!
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that sweet? HAHA. Thank you, Bryan!
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Like the image of whispers stamping the wind…
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aww. thank you! 🙂
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This is beautifully hypnotic..! ❤️ Worth a countless reads 🙂
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awww. thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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I liked the idea of whispering with one’s breath across 2000 miles.
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aww. thank you, Frank!
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Beautiful poem, Rosey!
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awww. thank you dear PJ! 😀
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:o)
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Such a tender expression of love! This touched this old romantic’s soul! Thanks for this!
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aww. i am glad to know that. thank you, Walter! 🙂
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Oh wowza-wowza, Sister! My fave lines: “I stamped the wind with my love’s…”
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aww. that us my fave too. ❤ thank you sissy!
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Most welcome!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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*sighs* this makes my heart warm.
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awww. glad to do just that. ❤
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🙂 🙂
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Love the longing in this tender poem so well expressed.
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awww. thank you, Ma’am! 🙂
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I love the power in your second stanza when the heart knows and stamps the wind 💖💨
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Things we do for love, glad they reached each other. 💝💟
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awww. i agree. thank you, Indy!
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Wonderful rhyme and imagery. Love the line …to silence fears of ends and byes… 🙂
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Awww. Thank you, Weena! ❤
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That whisper went a long way
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I agree, Ma’am. 🙂 Thank you!
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Wonderful. I wanna learn how to stamp the wind.
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Me too! 🙂 Thank you, Paul!
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I love the ending! What a gorgeous finish to a heart-wrenching portrait of loss.
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awww. thank you, Mel! ❤
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Crossing miles to assuage someone’s fears with a kiss of forever? Sigh. Such a gorgeous ending.
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awwww. thank you for such a lovely comment! ❤
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Such a hopeful and beautifully written poem. I love this!
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awww. thank you, Gilda! 🙂
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Very welcome!😀
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❤
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Lovely Rosema 💕
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thank you, Mandi! 😀
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Slightly sad and wistful… with much yearning…
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aww. thank you for such a beautiful comment. ❤
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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thank you! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Anytime!
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❤
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Ahhhh! so romantic.
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aww. thank you! ❤
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Aaww so romantic, even the breath travelled quiet a distance just to meet. A wonderful Rosema.
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awww. yes. love makes us romantic, i think. hehe. Thank you! ❤
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Aaww you sound like you’re on cloud 9 haha.
That’s good to hear that you’re happy.
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hehe. yea. 🙂 thank you! 🙂
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My pleasure
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Awesome quadrille. I particularly like the rhyming in the main stanza..
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awww. thank you! 🙂
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‘ stamped the wind’. 🙂
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thank you! 🙂
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