Lumiere (Inspired by Tenerife Sea by Ed Sheeran)
Trapped in my darkened state,
I waited for light.
Lumiere. Lumiere.
As blackness enveloped me fully,
I figured I am glowing inside.
Lumiere. Lumiere.
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I write because I read. I read because I write.
Lumiere (Inspired by Tenerife Sea by Ed Sheeran)
Trapped in my darkened state,
I waited for light.
Lumiere. Lumiere.
As blackness enveloped me fully,
I figured I am glowing inside.
Lumiere. Lumiere.
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This is so gorgeous, Rosey…though I continue to fret about you (and pray). I must sound like such a weak sister 😦
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awww. no not weak. a very caring one sister. ❤ love youu!
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Love you TOO! ❤
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Oh my! Oh my! 💖💖💖💖
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awwww. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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I had to come back and relish your poem again…you are BRILLIANT! ❤
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awwwwwwww. so sweet!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Are you back?? I’m chewing my nails to the knuckles, with worry!
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yes honey. i am back! ❤ ❤ ❤ sorry for worrying you my sissy! ❤
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Don’t be sorry, dear heart–I’m just glad to see/hear you (and some day I’ll learn to trust and not fret 🙂 ) ❤ ❤ ❤
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awwwww. yes. thank youuuu again my sweet sister! love you!
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You’re most welcome–love, love, love!
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ This is all that I can give you. Your words have rendered me speechless. Love and hugs are always with you, dear one 🙂
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awwwww. awwww. my sweet sweet sweet Nj! Thank youuuu! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Always ❤ ❤ ❤
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That was beautiful, the last phrase was a heart wrecked calling out to the light.
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oh wow. wow. thank you! 🙂
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@rosemawrites, your welcomed.
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Love this,very inspiring i found 🙂
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awwww. Glad to know dear! ❤ ❤ ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Damn. This feels like a million firecrackers going off inside.
Classic Rosema, no? 🙂
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Oh woow! love love love your comment! 😀 😀 😀 Thank youuu!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautiful Rosey!
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thank youuuuu! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Waw… This is amazing work… liked it… 🙂
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thank you, Ashish!
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So beautiful! ❤
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awww. thank you, Saima! ❤
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I’m picturing a firefly after reading the last lines. I love the idea of waiting for light but I do write a lot about light! 😉
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awwww. a firefly!! that made a lot of sense!!! thank you dear! ❤
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You’re welcome 😊
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This one is so beautiful, I have goosebumps.
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oh. oh woow. wow. thank you!
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You are so welcome. You’re a wonderful writer! 😊
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so are you! 🙂 ❤
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😌❤
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Pretty. Always the light inside you glowing. How were my comments on your poetry project? Were they okay? Was that what you were looking for? I just hope I didn’t offend you. Thanks
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Awww. thank you dear!!!
Hey… your comments are EPIC!!! Like I am soooo touched. Some of them are fictions yes, but you are right. I felt each poem. I feel them before I write them.
Sorry for not being able to answer. I had been sick and was offline and when i went back at work i am buried with tasks. Forgive me dear. I am in no way offended. I am honored. Elated. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I’m glad you are better and of course you have to catch up at work. Take all the time you need. Sometimes I’m commenting on the speaker or main characters in the poem if that’s what you mean. But sometimes I know the fictitious and real life overlap. Go easy on yourself and get extra sleep. My Mom says vitamin C all the time. It’s a natural antibiotic that you’ll never be immune to 🙂
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awwwwwww. thank you for the tips my dear Mandi! Yes. Yes. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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First i wanna say i hope you’re well by now….dont be too hard on yourself…take it slow..
Second this is such a melancholic poem as it maybe/somehow speaks of your emotional (?) state right now..
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Hi there honey! Thank youuuuu. I am well. Better. And I think I am really fine now. ❤ ❤ ❤
Second, I wrote this as a bit gentle but not sad. It's hopeful. 🙂 ❤ And I am indeed hopeful.
Thank you my dear. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Glad to know that…it comforts me from a distance.
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awww. geez. thank you. thank you for the prayers and for thinking of me. ❤
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A wonderful take on the prompt Rosema. It reads like it should be a song 🙂
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awww. thank you Davy! ❤
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I’ve always loved the word lumiere. Also, I never heard of this song before (even though I adore Ed Sheeran’s music) and I love this song! Thank you for introducing me to good music ❤
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awww. i so love love love love this song. one of the sweetest song i heard. ❤ I am so happy to introduce it to you. 😉
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