Fly Out (Inspired by The Other Side of Paradise by Glass Animals)
Cocooned inside her own catastrophe,
the smiling sun teased her pale skin ceaselessly.
Maybe it’s time to see the other side of paradise,
the only way is to fly out from her word-made cave of lies.
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10.24.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to November Notes Writing Challenge by my love Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies and yours truly. ❤
A Reading Writer 
Impressive! 🙂
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thank you! 🙂
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thank you! 😀
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Oh Oh Oh–BRAVO!!!!! Rosey, this is your new Best, my new Fave!!!!
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awwwww. i am glad! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Truly, truly!!!
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Ps: You could have written this for me, that’s how personal it feels and sings in my heart ❤
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oh. oh wooow. maybe my soul is sending this to your soul my dear sister. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Maybe so, sister ❤ It's a wonderful piece!
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Maybe it’s time to see the other side of paradise,
the only way is to fly out from her word-made cave of lies.
Yes, yes! ❤ ❤ ❤ Wise, wise words dearieee…
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awwww. thank you dearie! trying so hard to write something positive! HAAHA
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You’re welcome, dearie! Pambawi ba sa bloody posts mo previously>? Keep it up, dearie. ❤
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oo. saka sa mga masasakit sa puso. HAHA
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Ooooh!
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awww. thanks love! ❤
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Wowza! ❤ ❤
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awww. epic comment!!
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😀 ❤
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painfully beautiful 🙂
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awww. thank you, Seema! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Excellent Rosema. I love that first line, it sounds like the opening to another song 🙂
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oooooh. that comment… just melted my heart. 😀 thank you!
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“her word-made cave of lies.” Wow. She caged herself in lies. What a concept! Though it makes me wonder if I have done the same and how to break out?
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oh… i think embracing truth might be the only way, my dear? ❤ sending you hugs!
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You’re right about that but how can we know if we are surrounded by lies or embracing the truth?
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Whoa! Love the rhyming and the chills I got from your last line. Leave her and her lies!
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awww! thank youuu! YES! FREEEEEEEEDOM! ❤
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You render me speechless!! I am not sure my comment can do justice to this…
Brilliant! ❤ ❤ ❤
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awwww. your comments always do dear! thank you!!!
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Nice, be free!
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indeed. ❤ ❤ ❤
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