Sun’s love for moon’s eternal.
They may not shine together
but they still share the same sky.
I hope we’re like them, but we’ll ne’er be, ever.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 31.
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The Endecha is a ” The Canción triste que encierra un lamento”, (“sad song that locks up a moan”), a 16th century Spanish dirge or song of sorrow.
The Endecha is
- stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, written with 7-7-7-11 syllables per line.
- rhymed, rhyme scheme xaxa xbxb etc., x being unrhymed. The rhyme is often consonance only but true rhyme may be used.
Oh my, well done sadness ❤
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yes. yes yes dear. thank you! ❤
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Most welcome ❤
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Nice one. Well we all share earth, and sometimes we work together, often we don’t. Great personification.
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that is so true. thank you dear!
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Awwwwww, I adore this.
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awww. thank you!!!
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oh! so nice.. true, both shines
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indeed. 😀 thank you!
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So true! We all live on and belong to one planet and yet, we don’t live in harmony. I doubt we ever will 😦
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yeah… sadly true dear!
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Living in harmony is something we can all dream about and hope for Rosema. A lovely Endecha 🙂
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i agree Davy! Thank you! 🙂
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wow that first line is powerful. You pack so much into so few words.
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awwww. thank youuuu Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Sometimes they shine together and make an eclipse! 🙂 Great poem!
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that is so true! 😀 Thank you dear!
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Aww…you made me think it would be a happy poem but it turned out to be so sad… 😦
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er.. i am so sorry my dear.
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Lol it’s okay. A good writer brings out all the emotions in her reader ^_^
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awww. that is true dear.
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You write in the grandest way about the elements–literally and symbolically–of love and separation.
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Oh woooow. Grandest. That is too much brother! thank youuu, very much! ❤
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Excellent…. as usual…!! ❤❤❤
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