Don’t wait for someone to tell you
you’re beautiful,
you are soulful.
Your heart and soul are fresh and new.
The truth is as clear as white snow.
Simple or not,
make-up, without,
your real and raw beauty will show.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 30.
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The Onda Mel is an invented verse form introduced by Renelda Gibson.
The Onda Mel is:
- an octastich, a poem in 8 lines made up of 2 quatrains.
- syllabic, 8-4-4-8-8-4-4-8 syllables per line.
- rhymed abbacddc.
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The lady is right.
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wow. thank you! 😀
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You’re welcome! ^.^
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❤
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Love this be yourself and don’t be ashamed.
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yes! yes dear! 😀
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Awww I adore this. 💕 💕 💕
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awww. thank you love! ❤
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I love this Rosema!😊
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oh wooow. thanks dear! ❤
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Love your poem, Rosey–and wow, another new form!
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awwwww. thank you sissy! yes. yes! 😀
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Hope you’re doing okay ❤
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yes dear sister. 🙂 I am in a computer shop today. hehe. no work means no free internet.
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Oh, you have to pay??
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yes dear 😀
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Serious bummer, sorry to hear that 😦
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hey it’s okay sister. 😀
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Alright ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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thank you!!!
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You’re most welcome!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Lovely poem from a very lovely young woman!
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awwwwwwwwwwww. that is not true! HAHA
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Yes, it is TRUE!
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nice:)
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thank you!
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Yes!! Love yourself for everything that you are 🙂 Perfect!
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awww. i agree! ❤
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An excellent Onda Mel Rosema. The most simplistic things are the most beautiful 🙂
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awww. i agree! Thank you Davy!!!
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aw what a sweet poem and it’s form bears my nickname! How cool. 🙂
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YEAH!!!! Exactly! Cause i have you in my mind as i wrote this poem. 😉
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aw thank you!
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always! 😀
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🙂
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Awww, this is beautiful 😍 😍
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awww. thank you dear!
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Yes yes yes! A beautiful poem from a beautiful soul ❤
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awwwww. always sweet!
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An endearing message that is just. There is beauty in each of us. How could there not be? We are made by the creator of beauty. Of souls, too! Beautiful work, sister.
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Amen! amen brother! thank you! ❤
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