Silence of sea shells
against the roaring blue waves,
peace amid chaos.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 28.
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So if you are wondering if a 3 line, 17 syllable poem is Haiku or Senryu, you can pretty much place the serious poem in the Haiku column and the more human, humorous poems as the Senryu. (but there are humorous Haiku and serious Senryu, go figure..)
The Senryu is:
- a poem in 3 lines or less.
- syllabic, 17 syllables or less.
- commonly written in 3 lines but can be written in 2 lines and can be written with fewer syllables, never more.
- L1 5 syllables describes image.
- L2 7 syllables, adds conflicting image or expands first image
- L3 5 syllables provides insight (the ah ha! moment)through a juxtaposed image.
- written as a natural human experience in language that is simple, humorous, sometimes bawdy or vulgar.
- presented with an energy or liveliness in the focus and choice of words
- often humorous
- written in the moment.
- an imagist poem (draws the humor from the image)
- untitled but can be #ed.
This poem itself is so peaceful ❤
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awwww.. goal achieved then. 🙂
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Aww this. 💕
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thank youuu love! ❤
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Oh, you’ve written on my fave topic–LOVE this so much!!
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awww. i am glad to know that sissy. 🙂 thank you! ❤
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You’re welcome–more seashells, seashore poems, Please ❤
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Rosema, I love the feel of this short and sweet poem! A perfect dichotomy. As I read it I am right there, hearing the waves and soaking up the peace. Ahhhh bliss! Great photo too.
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awwwww!!! what an epic comment, Gilda! Thank you! ❤
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You are very welcome!😄
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Beautifully written Rosema.
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thank you dear. ❤
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Excellent Senryu (or is it a Haiku?) Rosema. The poem oozes serenity. Have a great weekend. 🙂
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i am not sure. haha thank you, Davy!
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I love the last line. Peace amid chaos indeed!
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yay! thank you Mel! ❤
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤
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What a wonderful aim, “peace amid chaos.” Thanks for the inspiration, sister!
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oh wow. thank you brother!
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Profound…!! Love it Rose…!! ❤❤❤
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(re-reading the poem)
thank you, Kazi! 😀 😀 😀
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