Favorite Scent: A Kimo

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Sweet scent of wildflowers has sadly failed
to be my favorite scent.
I still long for your smell.

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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 27.

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Kimo is an Israeli version of the haiku, found at Poetry Kaleidoscope. There should be no movement in the imagery.

The Kimo is:

  • a tristich, a 3 line poem.
  • syllabic 10-7-6 syllables per line.
  • unrhymed.

Published by areadingwriter

I read because I write. | I write because I read.

30 thoughts on “Favorite Scent: A Kimo”

  5. Sigh! I missed reading all your lovely poems. Those three lines say so much! A lot of meaning in those few words. Beautiful as always, Rose dear 🙂

    P.S. There’s an OctPoWriMo going on?! 😦 I missed it.

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      1. Write what makes you happy and comfortable… It doesn’t matter how short they are.. You every word has a meaning beyond and that’s where your success lies…!! ❤❤

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