Smiling sun always arrive
with the hope of a better life.
Maybe we are the only exception.
The poor ones inside a rich legion.
Dark nights are definitely ours,
but mornings restart our hearts’ wars.
Once the sun rays start to shine,
they remind me you are not mine.
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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 26.
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Aubade (dawn song) is a love poem, specifically the parting of lovers at dawn. Conflict between love and responsibility is at the center of this poetic genre.
This genre dates back to 12th century France and is the counterpart to a secular Evensong, Serena or Serenade.. The name Alba comes from the medieval watchman’s cry “alba” announcing the passing of the night and return of day. The early Occitan troubadour poems ended each stanza with the word.
The Alba or Aubade is:
- a love poem, most often mourning the parting of lovers while extolling the coming day.
- constructed at the discretion of the poet, length, stanzaic form, meter and or rhyme. although often a smattering of rhyme is present without any particular rhyme scheme.
- dramatic since it is often dialogue between the parting lovers or coming from a cuckold husband or a watchman’ warning. Sometimes dialogue is silent, expressed in images.
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awwww. thank you, love! ❤
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I have committed the word aubade to memory. Mornings are overrated. The night is so much more devious and fun. :D:D:D I’m kidding. 😉
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hahaha. your comments never fail to make my heart smile, Lonna! Thank youuu! 😀
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Awe…you make it easy for the goofy side of me to come out. And, I save that for the best of friends. 💖💖💖
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awwwwwwww. thank you darling Lonna! i hope your week has been nothing but GREAT! 😀
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GREAT DEAR! Thank you!! I hope yours is SPLENDID!!
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awww. it is!! 😀 😀 😀
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Trusting night, doubting day. Wondering how universal are the feelings. You show, sister, a difficult tension to endure.
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oh that is so true. thank you, brother!
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Wow that last stanza twists the knife. Bravo!
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oooh. twists the knife sounds soooo good! thank you, dear Mel! ❤
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You’re welcome 🙂 You’re bloody-minded today!
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er.. i am most of the time. HAHA 😀
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I think it’s rubbing off on me
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yeah. yeah 😀
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yeeeaah! just read the morbid pieces .. geez. i loooove it! HAHAHA
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Hey if it makes you happy, bring ’em on
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Such a sad last line. Perhaps, in the night the darkness is easier to hide feelings in? I think with dawn comes “the new” and “change.” New things in life are never easy, the require pain, all change does. But often. It’s for the better. Beautiful.
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Thank you for sharing your wise words my dear Mandi. Indeed. For the better. Always. ❤
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Hehe just my thoughts. Take it or leave it. Shut up would be okay too lol 🙂
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naaah!! i’ll take them all! HAHA shut up is not on the menu! 😀
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Stealing love? Haha. I really enjoyed this poem,we used to studied serenades and evensongs in high school. Thanks for the reminder. 😉
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awwwww. thank you! i am glad to know that, Marie! 🙂
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh my goodness, oh my goodness–I’m speechless, Rosey!
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awwww. you are the sweetest my dear! 😀 😀 😀
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You’re so amazing, you can do ANY form excellently!!!
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awwwww. you are the sweetest sissy!!!
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Sweet truth, dear sister! ❤
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indeed! 3<3 ❤ ❤
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An excellent Aubade Rosema. The feelings of being trapped in a relationship that doesn’t work come to the fore in this poem 😦
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awww. thank you! 🙂 thank you, Davy!
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This is perfect
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geez. thank you!
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I fell apart on the last line. Splendid, truly.
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oh wow. thank you! 🙂
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Oh my gosh, that last stanza ❤
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awwwwww. i know. -_-
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A very beautiful, yet sad, lovely poem!
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awww. thank you dear PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh 😦 😦 It sucks when a relationship doesn’t work out no matter how hard you try to make it work.
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yes. it really hurts.
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The last stanza: ouch! Well written, Rosema.
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awww. yes. thank you dear! 😀
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Amazing…!! ❤
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so i am re-reading this poem because i already forgot what i wrote. HAHA
Thanks, Kazi!
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