I almost dropped the two full paper bags when I saw the familiar blue car parked in front of our home. So they are back after a month.
Seated in front of my husband, my daughter and her rugged boyfriend sat in full-of-fear silence. I walked in without looking at them. I might not be able to stop myself from hugging my stubborn child who loves to escape with the “love of her life”.
“I’m pregnant,” her shaky voice revealed before she finally broke into tears.
“We’re not surprised,” I said as I gripped my husband’s shoulder.
I looked at my fragile 16-year old girl with an aching mother’s heart. What have I done wrong? I’m afraid I’ll never know.
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Word count: 120
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit:Yinglan 🙂
In response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) October 25, 2016.
Rules:
- a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less)
- each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end
- no serial (continuation) stories
- include a pingback to the challenge post
Thank you for hosting this awesome prompt, Priceless Joy!
Thank you for sharing. 👍🏼
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thank you for reading! ❤
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My pleasure, it was a touching post.
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aww. thank you! 🙂
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My pleasure.
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❤ ❤ ❤
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A mother would always end up asking themselves “what have i done?”…
Or maybe its time we prepare ourselves for the question “what have i not done?”…
A heartrbeaking tale of a mother Rose..it pierced thru my heart..
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yes dear. someone close to me is going through this. and my heart breaks for her mom because her mom has been nothing but supportive. sigh.
thank you for reading dear. ❤
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I have hope that the daughter has come back to her parents, who will still be supportive – all is not lost! Nice take on the prompt.
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yes. indeed. thank you! 🙂
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awww. thank youu!
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Wonderful story Rosey, filled with emotion! I imagine that would be how many parents would feel to hear that news. They feel like they did something wrong but in reality we don’t have complete control over our young teenage children. Great story!
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that is a sad truth, PJ! thank you very much! FFfAW is always a delight to participate to! 😀
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You are always a delight! I love it when you participate!
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awww. thank you dear! ❤
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Oof, this just tugged at my heart a little. It’s such a reality nowadays and you captured the mother’s emotions very well: torn between selfblame, selfless love, and anger.
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oh woooow. your words captured the essence of this piece, Jade. Indeed that is what i am feeling when i wrote this!
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It would be heartbreaking for the mother.Children grow up and make independent decisions before parents realize!
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that is a sad truth. Thank you for reading! ❤
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Wow this is incredible!
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awww. thank you, love! ❤
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oh my! This is every mother’s nightmare.
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i agree. ❤
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😎
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Mom did something right. She’s there for her daughter. A touching story and much more, sister.
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thank you, brother! 🙂
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Oh my, this must be so hard. Great story, Rosey.
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Oh dear!!! I found 10 of your comments on spam. argh. -_- Why WordPress!!! sigh…
Thank youuuuuu dear!!! indeed it is hard.
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I figured that must be what happened–others have mentioned the same issue, which is why I posted a short note for readers to check Spam. You DO know I would never not read and comment! ❤
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yeaaaaaaaah!!!! 😀
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🙂 🙂
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Okay, after looking at the image, not in a million tries would I have guessed that you would come up with something so unique. But then again, this is you so I should have known 😀
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NJ!!! you are melting me with your words!!! thank youuu! ❤ ❤ ❤
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What a dilemma Rosema. The bond and love between the mother and daughter will pull them through (I guess). A powerful short story.
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yes. i think so too. Thank you! 🙂
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Oh dear!
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🙂
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Great story, Rosema! You’ve captured the emotions well.
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thank you! 😀 😀 😀
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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❤
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Sometimes the parents do their best but teenagers still try to push their independence.
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that is a sad truth. thanks, Jacq!
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