Strumming sweet fingers
against guitar’s strings
create tuneful soothing notes.
Whispering wistful wind
against swaying grasses
dances with nature’s changing clothes.
Peeping sun rays
against clear window pane
paint stunning morning arc.
Your warm touch
against my waiting thrilled skin
forms chilling body sparks.
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Lovely romantic scene you’ve painted here. 🙂
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awwww. thank you Marie! ❤
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As always, you’re very welcome. 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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An excellent poem Rosema that draws you right into the moment. “Whispering wistful wind ” – wonderful alliteration 🙂
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geez. i am honored to get that kind of feedback, Davy! Thank you very much! ❤
And… i am an alliteration junkie. HAHA 😀
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Ohhh…. i must say it gave me chills.. and i agree witn Davy , the use of alleteration wow brilliant..
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awwww. i hope good chills my dear, Mich! ❤ Thank youuuuu! 😀
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Good indeed Rose…
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awww. thank you dear Mich! ❤
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Love each stanza but the last one sizzles with the body sparks ~
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i am glad to know that, Grace. Thank you! 😀
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Whistles!!❤️ Oh this is absolutely stunning a write, Rosemarie 😀 especially love “Your warm touch against my waiting thrilled skin forms chilling body sparks.” Beautifully executed ❤️
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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So much great sound in this. I’m particularly enamored of this phrase:
“dances with nature’s changing clothes.”
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awwww. thank you. that’s another line inspired by seasons. 😀
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Very romantic!
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for a change, Bryan. 😀 thank you! 😀
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Notes too as sparks of sound cast off into the world.
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indeed that is true. 😀
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Beautiful, Rosey!! ❤ ❤
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awwww. thank you PJ! 😀 😀 😀
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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thank you! ❤
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🙂
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This is lovely and steamy too. I like the metaphors you use of music and art. Very nice, Rosema!
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yay! thank you, Mish. steamy, it is. 😀
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I like how you used three metaphors to build up to the romantic finale…the first stanza especially.
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awwww. i am glad to know that, Ms. Victoria! thank you! ❤
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This phrase sets the time of day and complements the theme of sparks: “stunning morning arc.” Lively poem, sister!
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awwww. i am glad, brother! thank you! 😀
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A beautifully romantic poem. That last stanza is a stunner!
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awwwwwww. i am glad. i can be romantic sometimes. hahaha
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you always are!
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😀 😀 😀
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Very neat way of using “chilling” . Usually as something creepy or horrifying, but in your poem “chilling body sparks” seems to be a good thing like, amazing chemistry.
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yessss. you got that so right dear Mandi. Melting chills. 😀 😀 😀
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😍 Love those lol.
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😀 😀 😀
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Oh you KNOW, I’m crazy for this one–YES!
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awwwwwww. i am glad sissy! 😀 can be sexy sometimes. HAHA
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Yes, nice sexy is very fun 🙂
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i agree! 😀 😀 😀
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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I love that phrase – chilling body sparks! How do you come up with this, Rosema? ❤
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er… i don’t know Jade. -_- HAHAA! Thank youuu! 😀
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Nice combination at the end of waiting thrilled skin and chilling body sparks.
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thank you, Frank! 🙂 your words are highly appreciated! 😀
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This is lovely… there is a real buildup of passion here… from that gentle strings to the sparks.
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thank you, Bjorn! 😀
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Strings of vocal
chords extend
guitars of Love..
Guitar men
and women..
etc.. and
drums
of heARt
beat sAMe..
DaNCinG toGeTheR
Moonlit Fires now within
comes.. more in sensing
feeling all as music plays
A Song of BriLLiAnt liGht..:)
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awwww. thank youuuuu for such a nother special comment!
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Always a pleasure..
My FriEnd..:)
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Nice half-rhymes.
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thank you! 😀
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I love your beautifully descriptive verses that lead up to the sizzling last one, Rose! Really enjoyed this!
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awww. thank you, Gayle! ❤
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Excellent piece of artwork……!! Bravo
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thank you, my love. ❤
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