My dear,
you are mine
undoubtedly.
But strive, so I’ll be yours
wholly.
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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 23.
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Cinqku is a 5 line haiku attributed to American poet Denis Garrison found at Poetry Bridge. It particularly explores the use of the line break and retains the maximum syllable count of the haiku. (Note: the haiku is a small poem of 17 syllables or less, the Cinqku is more restrictive with a strict syllable count of 17.) The Cinqku should have a turn or surprise in L4 and L5.
The Cinqku is:
- a pentastich, a poem in 5 lines.
- syllabic. A strict syllable count of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables per line.
- composed with a turn or surprise in L4 or L5.
- untitled.
Love me as much as I love you. Be worthy of my love as I am worthy of yours. Such a succinct and meaningful poem, Rosemarie. ❤
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awwwwwwwwww!!!! your poetic comment is more epic, Lonna!! geeeZ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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My rambling is nonsense. Your poetry is divine. ❤
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never nonsense, Lonna!!! never!!!
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too kind to me dear. ❤
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never! never kind! always honest! 😀 😀 😀
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Awwww
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yay! thank you love!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Ooooh, I like this!! You have to hope he/she will not be clueless, and will make greater effort… 🙂
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you really read between the line my dear sissy. i think he is trying. 🙂
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Surely he is ❤
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❤
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Good advice, sister! Words to the wise! From the wise!
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you are giving me too much credit, brother! 😀
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Love with conditions eh? Love how you put the doubt in here!
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yeah. i am prone to this kind of feeling. maybe i am too mind-centric than heart. 😉
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I’m the same. The mind has no off switch
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i agree. -_- haha
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I like the twist in lines 4 and 5 Rosema. Looks like he has got a lot of work to do. A great Cinqku 🙂
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yeah. he has. and he knows it. hAHA
Thank you, Davy!
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Oh gosh, love with a twist haha lol
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hahaha! yeah! because my mind is twisted! HAHA
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“But strive, so I’ll be yours
wholly.” I like this line the best dearie! 😀 ❤
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yeahh! para sa kanya yan! HAHA chareng!
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I know, I knowww.. hahaha
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HAHAHAHAHA!
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