Autopsy my tender words, ‘fore you let them in.
They may sound sugary sweet, but better check ‘em.
In-depth they bleed dark curses— chocolate-coated.
Just like your false promises, bland and not buttered.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 16.
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Imayo It seems that whenever I research a Japanese form, it involves an alternating 5-7 or 7-5 syllabic structure. The Imayo (present style) of the 12th century is no exception. This form creates long lines broken by caesura separating 7 and 5 syllables in the line.
The Imayo is associated with song, (recitation in a high pitch) and originated with the common people in folk song. But by the Heian period it was embraced by the Imperial court. This folk art evolved with the influence of Imperial aristocrats and famous courtesans or Shirabyoshi dancers incorporated the Imayo into their performances. One type of Imayo is used in Kabuki, Japanese theatre.
The Imayo is:
- a 4 line poem.
- syllabic, written in 12 syllable lines broken by caesura after the 7th syllable.
This is very dark and ominous. Very emotive. The person receiving that message had better look out!
Have a blessed weekend!
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ooooh. thank you, Suz! i agree with you! 😀
I hope you had a great weekend! ❤
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You’re welcome, Rosema. Thank you. It was a fine weekend. I hope yours was, too. Here’s to a great week for all. 🙂
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yes. mine too! 😀 Cheers! 😀
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I am glad to hear that yours was great. 🙂
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thank you dear! ❤ ❤ ❤
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You’re welcome, my friend. ❤❤❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Oo this one is full dark references and decadent descriptions!
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ooooh. love the poetic comment dear Mel! ❤
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You’re welcome
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❤
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Wow. Dark and lovely.
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I agree with everyone…its dark…
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Wowza, fierce…
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yaaaay! 😀 😀 😀
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Yes, yaaaayyy!
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My favorite one of October 🙂
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oh wow. thank you!
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No problem
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❤
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Great poem! Very dark!
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indeed dear PJ!!! 😀 😀 😀
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Very dark, but sweet, Rosema. I enjoy the snaps of origin and history you write with each new poetic form.
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oh wow. thank you! credit goes to the my source! 😀
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Words like dressed wounds, underneath “they bleed dark curses.” Skillful, scary paradoxes, sister!
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Ooooh Thank you brother! 😀
What happened to your photo? It’s missing.
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Hmm, I don’t know. I think I was trying to change to something more recent. Maybe I deleted what was there. I’ll have to check. Sigh. Thanks for the alert!
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