Luna’s lively glow
calms down my
longing, lonely soul.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 11.
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Lune is an American invented form in 3 lines. It provides 2 options. The lines can either be measured by syllables or words. I found this at Instant Poetry Forms
The Lune is:
- a poem in 3 lines.
- measured either by 5-3-5 syllables per line or 5-3-5 words per line.
- unrhymed.
Oh how lovely, if a bit wistful ❤
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awww. yes.
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❤
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Filled with so much solitude.
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yes. yes dear.
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Ooooooh
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thank you love. ❤
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I feel the longing in this one. You picked a great image for it. What city is pictured under the moon?
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oh i don’t know. -_- haha
thank youuu!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is beautiful, Rosema, and I love the alliteration…what a nice rhythm it has.
Have a blessed week!
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yay! i am a fan of alliteration darling! 😀 😀 😀
you have a great week too!
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Very cool. Thank you. 🙂
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always. 🙂
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🙂
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Rosema love reading you’re posts as always, and Thank you for regularly checking my posts too. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Beautiful yet simple Rosema. 👍🏼
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thank you dear and it is my pleasure too! ❤
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👍🏼
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A beautiful short poem Rosema.
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thank you, Davy!
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Beautiful!
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thank you, PJ! ❤
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What a promising rhyme to take one through a difficult time. Bless you, sister!
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oh thank you brother!
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Succinct but sweet. Love how the moon clams. I feel that way too.
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yes. the moon has that effect. ❤
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