As the darkness of the evil night cloaks buildings and city lights,
her tired soul drowned in the sea of strong, weakening beer bites.
Unknown he led her into a dark corridor, t’was too late to fight.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Mike Wilson
In response to Sonya of Only 100 Words‘ Three Line Tales Week Thirty-Six.
If you want to join, here are the simple rules:
- Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt.
- Link back to this post.
- Tag your post with 3LineTales (so we can find you in the Reader).
- Read and comment on other TLT participants’ lines.
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Got goose bumps after reading this!
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oh wow. thank you!
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Chilling! There is a reason why they add the disclaimer, Drink Moderately. 🙂
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yeah!!! very wise view dearie! indeed
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Dark, but drew me in.
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ooh thank you darling!
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You are so welcome — I had to double check to see it was you! Your tales are generally not as dark, but it proves what a versatile writer you are — and very convincing!
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awwww. thank you, my dear! been writing a lot of dark pieces lately. 🙂
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I’ve been thinking of you and your not-as-sunny, hopeful posts and am sending positive thoughts your way 😉
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awwwww. i am fine my darling. 🙂 ❤
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🙂
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Oh dear…too scary…wish we could protect all these girls… Great 3 lines, though!
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oh yeah. if only we can!!!thank you, sister!
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You’re most welcome always ❤
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Oh my. 💖 💖 💖
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awww. thank you dear!
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Wow please continue writing it.
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oh wow. yes. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you. You write beautifully.
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aw. thank you. so you do too. ❤
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Aaww Thank you.
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you’re welcome. 😉
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👍🏼
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Great piece Rosema. I would love to see this written out as a short story or maybe something even bigger.
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Oh geez. Now that’s a challenge, Davy? 😀
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Oh..this should be a reminder to all ladies out there…
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yes. indeed my dear Mich! ❤
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Love the rhymes. Lightens the eerie mood just enough to make for a captivating read.
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Yeah, that’s the goal my dear. to rhyme to avoid too dark aura. hehe. Thanks, dear Jade!
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Very chilling! Great poem!
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ooooh. i did it right, then! 😀 haha. thank you dear!
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Yes, you did it right! 🙂
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awww. thank you PJ! ❤ i hope you're having a great weekend!
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That was wow! 🙂
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awww. thank you, Prakash! 🙂
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Loved it! Especially how you’ve roped in so many emotions and sensations in so few words. Awesome.
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Hi! Thank you for such a sweet comment. ❤
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Damn, I hope it was lite beer. Powerfully written.
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Oh i hope so too. Thank you, Drew. I hope you are well.
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Surviving.
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oh geez. why?
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Oh my. I also had goosebumps while reading this! It’s spine tingling
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oh wooow. i am honored.
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You’re welcome 🙂 I will catch up on your lovely poems tomorrow. I’ve been snowed under with work and webinars this weekend. I’m surprised my brain hasn’t oozed out of my ears. I hope you had a great weekend my friend.
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Imagining brain oozing out on your ears!! NOOOOO!!!
No worries my dear Mel. 🙂 It’s okay. 😀 You should rest first.
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Thanks you but you know what they say, no rest for the hardworking dreamer.
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yes. indeed. i am trying to read more of your book but work has been… chaotic. i am really sorry. i am trying my best. ❤
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I understand. I hope you’re enjoying the book 🙂
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i am!! i just really can’t keep my eyes open. 😦
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Oh my! i am glad you are enjoying the book. 🙂 It’s been a tough week but hearing you say that makes it all better.
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awww. sending some hugs to you dear! ❤
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Thank you 😊
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always! ❤
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😊
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Poor dear, have to be aware of things like beer and amount drunk with strangers.
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yes dear. can’t imagine how traumatic this will be.
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Scary in a real way. A warning! Thank you, sister.
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yes!!! thank you, brother!
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