Powerful
tongue as sharp as sword.
Spit slashing
strong words of
life, death, destruction and hope.
Please use it wisely.
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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 5.
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The Shadorma is a simple syllabic verse form Theated by James Neill Northe that is most effective when written using strong words or phrases.
The Shadorma is:
- a hexastich, a poem in 6 lines although you certainly could choose to write any number of sixains in this syllabic pattern.
- syllabic, 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables per line.
- Unrhymed.
Oh wow. 💖
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oh wow, love. ❤ thank youuu!
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Reflective poem you have here, dearie. Yes, I agree.
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yay! thanks, dearie!!!! 😀
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A wise reflective poem Rosema. I think if we could master the art of controlling what we say sometimes, the world would be a much better place.
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Proverbial teaching, sister! Hope we learn.
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oh yes. i hope so too, brother!
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Wow they second line is intense but true
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i agree! thanks, Mel!
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You’re welcome
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Excellent, excellent Shadorma, Rosey–words can be so deadly.
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awww. thank you, sissy! I learned that form from you! 😀
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Haha, I didn’t know that…I like the Shadorma form 🙂
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Powerful, yes!
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awwww. thank youuuuuu! 😀
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❤️💗💜
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❤
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Wise words.
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oh wow. thank you, Andrew!
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