Purple-
colored skin throbs.
Even after tear’s flow stopped.
Each strong blow leaves brutal, deep marks.
Skin to soul, she’s left scarred and scathed.
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 4.
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*Pensee found in the Caulkins Handbook stresses exact syllable count and strong end words. This invented verse form was first introduced by American poet and educator, Alice Spokes. It can be found on line at Instant Poetry Forms for Kids
The Pensee is:
- a pentastich, a poem in 5 lines.
- syllabic, 2-4-7-8-8 syllables per line.
- unrhymed.
- titled.
Aw man.
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yes love. 😦
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I agree. This is so sad
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aww. yes. thank you dear Mel.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤
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Powerful words, love your poetry!♡
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awww. thank you, Sheridan! 😀
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And now I know what a Pensee is!!! In theory and in practice. Indeed, very strong end words. Love it, Dear! ❤
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YAY! Thank you, Lonna! The form requires some strong words. so there! 🙂
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Very fierce/powerful.
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awww. thank you dear! ❤
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Welcome.
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❤
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It is very sad that she is enduring such things. 😦
I have never heard of this poetry style before. I may give it a try some day soon. Thank you for sharing the links about it.
Have a blessed day.
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Aww. I agree. So sad. 😦
You’re welcome, Suz! Looking forward to reading yours. ❤
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Thank you, Rosema. I hope that you are enjoying this poetry adventure. 🙂
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yes. 🙂 thank you, Suz!
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You’re welcome, Rosema. 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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Beautiful and powerful. Love it.
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awww. thank you!!!
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My pleasure
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Doing this.
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yay! 😀
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An excellent and very powerful poem Rosema. Thank you for introducing me to the Pensee.
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Pensee said it is honored to meet you, Davy! 😀
Thank you! ❤
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Skillful use of the verse form, sister, to show a tragic story in the purple marks.
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oh wow, thank you, brother!
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Certainly, sister. You touch on an enormous, difficult reality, that of victimhood.
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aww. cannot thank you enough, brother!
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Beautiful and sad, Rosema. No one should have to endure such things. Thanks for introducing me to a new poetry form. I might have to try this one out sometime. 🙂
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I agree, Louise. No one deserves this kind of life.
I am glad to share Pensee with you. 😉 Looking forward to your own. 🙂 And thank you for reading! ❤
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Oh dear, you gave your favorite color a morbid twist… Brilliant!
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YOU ARE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!! 😀 😀 😀
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i am too excited to see you are here my dearie. thank you! yeah. purple might be hurt. haha.
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Coz I need a dose of your poems, you know! 😀 Haaay, bring back happy purples soon. K? Hehe
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Oh ouch Rosema…I feel the pain of this poem as if the bruises are on my own skin. 😦
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Awgh. Sorry about that my dear Jade. ❤
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