This is the last part of my ‘Ride’ short story series. For best the reading experience, please read Ride and Second Ride.
I am ashamed of myself while he’s laughing his heart out.
This is always the scenario when our friends, our families and even our little kids recalled that fateful second ride.
The tale of that beautiful woman on his shoulder, apparently a complete stranger to him, has been a laughing matter for him, a shameful scene for me and a hit plot twist for our friends and family.
He never saw me on that day, and even the next Monday and even the next month.
Our second ride has been our last ride together.
As days became weeks and weeks became months, I have lost all hopes for a part three for our bus-inspired-love-story. I erased my fantasies. I made myself believe that he’s no way my soul mate. I tried to forget him and that girl on his shoulder.
It was a bright Saturday morning when fate surprised me in no way I have imagined.
I saw him in front of my house… talking to my Dad! My Dad! Like my scary-looking Dad!
My heart jumped out, my eyes went wide when I realized that he is indeed in front of my house…with a bouquet of flowers.
I have no idea, until now, how he knew my address. He said it’s a beautiful secret he will keep until his last breath.
But his courage to ask my Dad for permission to court me on their first meeting sealed his seat in my heart.
It took him a year for me to said yes.
It took him another three years for me to be his fiancee.
It took us a year to prepare for our wedding.
It took us two kids to give our lives’ new meaning.
And it took us a bumpy yet full-of-love two-decade ride on marriage to somehow prove that our story has no ending.
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01.22.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Awww…okay this was a sweet ending, exactly as I’d hoped, but I am confused about one detail: how did he find her house? Who was the girl on his shoulder? (Oops, I guess that’s two details LOL)
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awwww. thank you my dear. that how did he find her house, i would like to keep it as mystery. 😉 you can guess, though. 😉
as to the second question I answered it here: “The tale of that beautiful woman on his shoulder, apparently a complete stranger to him,”
thanks, dear Jade!
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Hmm, a story that leaves more questions for the reader to answer. Mysterious indeed Rosema! And oh, sorry, I guess I didn’t register that sentence -_-. Lovely tale, my dear!
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it’s okay my dear! 😉 yeah… i want to keep that way. 😉
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that was beautiful!
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Thank you! 🙂
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thank you, Joe!
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Ooooh such a sweet ending.
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awww. thank you love!
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Took him long enough to build the courage to ask her out! Such a sweet story…and I love that it was decades in the making. Love is often not a moment in time (but I think romance is more); love is a journey in life–the good the bad, that is all part of loving. ❤ Have a terrific weekend!
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Cannot agree more dear Lonna. Having an almost 6-year relationship has made me realize that love is beyond that lovely feeling. ❤
I hope you are having a great weekend my dear! ❤
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Wow! 6 years! Awe, I’m so happy for you. ❤ I knew my hubz freshman year in college.
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awwwww. that is sweeter!!! and you’ve been together for??
(forgive me for being nosy!!)
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Oh I don’t mind sharing with you, though I do wish it was for your private eyes only. 😀 I’ve been “stuck” with him for almost 20 years now…since the first day he held my sweaty hands.
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AWWWWWWW. I am melting now. that is soooo sweet!!!
(And I have sweaty hands too!!!! Until now!!!!) HAHA
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That was sweet… That’s what I call true love!
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i agree! Thank you!
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Your welcome miss
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Oh Wowza, wowza, wow-wow-WOW!!!
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awww. you are too sweet my dear! 😀 😀 😀
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We never know what to expect with your pieces–they might be LOVE that everyone wishes for, or they may have your trademark fierce Twist!! 🙂
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awwwww. thank you sister! I am desperately avoiding to be predictable. 😉
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You, predictable–never!! 🙂
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awww. you are the sweetest sister!!!
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Ohhh, I needed to hear that today–thank you ❤
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awwww. you are always welcome my lovely sissy!
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❤
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I really liked this. Kinda on confused on how he found her but I’m glad he did. I love that he asked her dad for permission to court her. That was sweet.. 😊
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awww. thank you, Marie. 🙂 I skipped that part as I want the mystery. ❤
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Ahh..ok gotcha. You’re welcome. 😊
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Awww, so sweet!!
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yay. thank you, Gilda!
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❤️💙💜💛
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What lovely, satisfying (overall) bus rides. Thank you, sister, for taking us on these! And for leaving us the promise of an ongoing, fulfilling journey.
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awwww. thank you for coming along, brother! and for the lovely kind words. ❤
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Oh I love the ending. This is a beautiful series!
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aww. thank you dear!
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Wonderful series! I’m in love with the sweet ending. ❤
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awwww. thank youuu! 😀
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You’re utmost welcome, Rosema!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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