This is the second part of my Ride series. Part 1 was published yesterday.
Wait! Can I get your name?
This is what I wanted him to say, but, he sadly didn’t. I fell asleep along the ride and when I woke up, he’s already gone.
I was honestly hoping to see him again but I didn’t, until it was a Monday morning again.
I was slowly making my way inside the jampacked bus when I saw a familiar hair, black-yet-almost-brown, properly combed, irresistibly neat.
As I saw his wide yet wrinkle-free forehead, his bushy yet so masculine brows, his dark and long eyelashes covering his gorgeous eyes, I was sure, it was him.
My heart beat too fast, excited to know if our story will have its part two.
He was actually sleeping, but he might wake up and see me still, right?
Until… I saw the girl beside him.
Maybe a year younger than me, with curly dark brown hair, pointed nose, long lashes, perfect brows and lovely lips.
She was also asleep… and… her head was on his shoulder.
I stopped in a corner opposite them and looked away.
Disappointed, I was not able to stop asking myself…
“Is this the end of our story?”
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01.15.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Hmm…maybe the girl is a younger sister? Family friend? The story need not end here! Looking forward to the next part 😀
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I agree!
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haha! maybe!
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awwwww. love the hopeful guesses! 😀 😀 😀
Thank you dear Jade!
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Noooo! I hope not. I hope the girl is a friend or a relative.
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haha. i hope so too! 😀 we’ll see!
Thank you for reading!
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I enjoy this installment (too), sister. Along with the rest of the story (so far), I like today’s description of his hair, “irresistibly neat.” Which is also how your narrative is!
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awwww. thank you brother! the last part will be posted soon! 😀
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Oh wicked sequel, Rosemarie! 😀 She’s totally the sister, yes?!
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haha. we’ll see later, LOnna! 😀
Thank you for reading!
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I’m so glad I don’t have to wait a year to know! 🙂 Can’t wait.
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haha. yeah! i won’t torture you like that. 😉
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Yes, she must be his pitiful cousin that he’s looking after temporarily 🙂
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hahah! another hopeful guess! 😀 we’ll see sister! 😀
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🙂 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Interesting, I’m sure you did some work on this story before. I remember some of it. Thanks for the mention 🙂
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yes dear. 😀 thank youuu for the support!
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thank you. Joe!
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Aww I hope she’s a cousin. I think I read this bsck in January but I’m glad of the replay. It’s a sweet story
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yes. you remembered right my dear. 😀 thank you!
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