Stranger. That is what I am.
Sitting people all in black and white, I am estranged to everyone, except one person. She is the only human who knows me here. But she can never say who I am.
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She’s imperfect but she tries.
She is good but she lies.
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Silence. Murmurs. Quiet sobs. The humans that surround me is as still, as her, as me.
I am somehow a gatecrasher to a wake I was not invited to. But I am here, for her, for a woman who used to be mine.
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She is hard on herself.
She is broken and won’t ask for help.
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Her mom has spoken, in between loud wails.
Her husband has said a short heartless sentence.
Her little lass, who looked just liked her, sang a song.
Her best friend has stood and hold the microphone, but wasn’t able to utter any word.
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She is messy but she’s kind.
She is lonely most of the time.
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Now it’s my turn.
“Anyone who want to offer words for…”
I stood, just before the sentence was finished. Everyone looked at me.
I gripped the small piece of paper I’ve been holding for hours. It contains the eulogy I have written…for the only girl that I loved. For the girl who was once mine.
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She is all of this mixed up.
And baked in a beautiful pie.
She is gone but she used to be mine.
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12.04.2015
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
I’m delighted you used this song in a poem/writing as well. It’s so good isn’t it? The sadness and emotional battle in the song make the song memmorable with Sara B’s wonderful voice. I love how you used a line or two at a time and then your own lines saying no one understood this girl who died – committed suicide? Except for the guy who loved her of course. Great job 🙂
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Yes. You surely read between the lines dear Mandi! 🙂
I agree with you. this song is so inspiring. so sad. so deep. 🙂 I am so glad to know we both write about it. Great minds? 😉
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Haha yes I agree. Great minds thinks alike. I have to hear some more of her tunes on itunes now 🙂
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oh yes please!!! she has a looot more beautiful songs! 😀
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Ooooh.
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thanks, love! ❤
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You take the sadness in the song and add so many layers and tones. Sister, you show what it means to be fully human, especially when being human’s hard.
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Aww. Thank you very much brother. This song has that power. 🙂
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Love this song…you and Mandi have great taste for song prompts.😊
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yeah! i agree! sara B. is the woman! 😀
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It is a beautiful new way to write poetry using a song we probably all love,..
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I completely agree. This is such a special song. 🙂
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Wow, very heartfelt and moving, Rosey.
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Awww. Thank you very very much sissy! 😀
P.S. I have a special email for you! 😉
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Oh, I’m excited now!!!
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yay! 😀 😀 😀
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:):) <3<3<3:):)
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Wow. Wow. Wow. What a moving piece
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oh thank you for those wow’s! 🙂
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You’re welcome
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😀
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A very clever and powerful piece Rosema. I had never heard this song but found it on Spotify and re-read this piece while playing the song in the background. Wow 🙂
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Wow!!! That’s awesome! how was it? 😀 I never tried that yet! 😀
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It worked really well Rosema.
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awww. got to try it!
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