slowly drifting,
silently sinking,
gradually calming,
million cells shouting.
welcoming blackness,
embracing blankness,
letting mind rest,
leaving world’s mess.
—
12.09.2015
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
I write because I read. I read because I write.
slowly drifting,
silently sinking,
gradually calming,
million cells shouting.
welcoming blackness,
embracing blankness,
letting mind rest,
leaving world’s mess.
—
12.09.2015
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Rather a blissful falling
No fractures
No bleeding
No further pain
Let the cells shout
Rosema!
Wonderful post
Shiva
🙂
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Hey shiva glad to find you here…your not in my reader..not can i ever get thru your site…
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..nor..
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I do not what’s happening. But I think you can as well manage it on your Reader. You can see ‘Manage’icon there in your Reader and there you can do accordingly manage the things. Inform me if you are not able to do that I tell you one more option.
This is happening to many on my follow.
Thanks I shall visit again.
Shiva
👍🙏😃
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awwww. that is one lovely poem, Shiva!
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Very calming, a balm to troubled times.
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Oh wow. Thank you for the poetic comment, Sir.
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Leaving world’s mess was the perfect finale for this one.
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awww. thank you! 😀
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I could connect so much with that.Loved it to the core of my heart.
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awwww. thank you! 🙂
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Such solitude, beautiful, Rose!
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Oh thank you, Iris! ❤
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My pleasure, Rose. ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Gorgeous choice of words, flow
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Oh wow. Thank you, Daal!
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you captured what it feel like to fall asleep so perfectly my friend!
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awww. thank you my dear friend, Mel!
P.S. How was the editing? Did you finish on time? ❤
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I’m still editing. You’re welcome
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go girl!
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Thank you.
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you’re welcome!
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🙂
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Well done–leaving the world’s mess sounds like true Heaven.
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cannot agree more, sissy! Thank you!
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Most welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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The last line provides a very smooth ending to the breath taking falling..
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Oh wooow. what a poetic comment, Mich! Thank you! ❤
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Poetic response to a truely wonderful work of poetry..
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aww. thank you!
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Sounds like old-style riddle-telling.
When we fall, might we fall this way.
Appealing work, sister!
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oh wow. thank you very much, brother!
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Oh, truly! We need moments like this once in a while.. ✌🏿️😊
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aww. cannot agree more dearie! And YOU are here!! 😀 😀 😀
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Haha! Yes, I’m came to visit you! 😀
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awww. how sweet naman! 😀
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