First part was published yesterday.
Chilling shivers crawled in my veins when I saw my bloody-self inside my wrecked car.
“So what am I now? Am I a soul now? Am I dead? Am I alive?” I shouted but no voice left me.
The ambulance arrived. Several medical staffs tried to retrieve my blood-soaked body. The unfolding scene is nauseating but I urged myself to think straight.
I collected myself and prepared to run to get inside the ambulance.
But I stopped as I felt a warm yet slightly cold hand touch my arms.
I am unsure if my heart is still alive but it surely beat fast once my skin recognized this hand.
This hand belongs to the man I was supposed to marry five years ago.
This hand belongs to the man I cried and yelled at when he was not able to see me on that fateful day of October.
I waited on our corner but he did not come because he died.
But this hand… is definitely….
“No, no, no, no.” “This is couldn’t be. This couldn’t be.”
But my senses say otherwise.
This is how his touch feels like.
And this is how he makes me feel.
I slowly turned around.
And urged myself to look up.
My heart stopped.
Because the hand resting is my arm is indeed… his.
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09.28.2015
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Awesome story! It really pulled me in and engaged me into the story. Great!!
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awwww!!! thank you dear PJ! There will be two more!!!
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Great scene, full of shivery, scary details! Is this part of a long series?
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YAY! Thank you, Vijaya! 😀 Yes, it’s my first series. The first part was posted yesterday. This is the second. And there will be two more. 🙂 I hope you will like the series as this is special to me. ❤
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What a captivating second part! Now it begs the question, is she dead? Is this a ghost story? I also love the ethereal feel of your words. The story flows so easily. Can’t wait for part 3 😀
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Awww. Thank you dear Jade! I think those questions will be answered in part 3. 😉
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Thank you for the comment. 🙂
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Awesome write. Leaves us wanting more.
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awww. thank youuu! there will be mooore!!! 2 more parts. 😉
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Cool
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😀
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Oh my what an ending! Is dead? Is there a part 3?
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Yes! 😀 There will be part 3 and an Epilogue. Two more parts. 😉
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🙂 Yay! I’ll look for them
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thank you dearest Mel!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Sweetie, this piece startled me. I was trying to guess the ending, but you write with such a creative and emotional touched that I just let myself absorb it. It’s quite the cliffhanger. 😀 I love it!
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oh wooow! thank you very very very much sweetie! 😀 have you read the first part? This is the second part and there will be two more that will answer your questions. 😉 I hope you will enjoy it. 😀
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No, I haven’t. Will you share with me the link to part 1? I’d love to catch up. =) Thank you! My heart may not be able to take it, but I’ll risk it. 😀
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HAHA! Apologies for the late response my dear Lonna. This is the link for the first part: https://areadingwritr.wordpress.com/2016/09/06/seasons-part-1/.
I believe you have read the 2nd and 3rd. There will be one final part after the finale. 🙂 Thank you veyr much dear!
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Thanks sweetie, heading there now…
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thank you dear!
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Very compelling and exciting story. So she sees her five-years-dead fiancé, and she feels him, his touch. Are they both ghosts? Is he bringing her to the afterlife? Is there a part 3? Very interesting fiction Rosrma. You’re doing great at these longer pieces you’ve started doing.
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I know you’ve already finished this series, Mandi, but I only read this comment now. -_- nonetheless, please know that i really really really value your thoughts! ❤ thank you my friend!
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No worries. I just find I’m not able to keep up on all the blogs I want to read every day so, many I end up reading latter-on. Thanks for your comment back.
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Wow, this story really leaves you wanting more! Very interesting, suspenseful reading.
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yay! thank youuu! and there will be more. 😉
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Great! You’re welcome!☺️
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Ah! Reunited, not in life but in death. Very good read. Great job!
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maybe not yet. we’ll see once the series unfolds. 😀 Thank you, Marie!
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Oh? I love a good plot twist! 😆
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yay! good to know that. 😉 thank you for reading!
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Hey great,now u r doing flash fiction too….cool.best wishes
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oh. thank you! 🙂 ❤
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Great second part Rosema. Looking forward to part 3.
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Thank you, Davy!
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[…] First two parts were published last Tuesday and yesterday. […]
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Now things are even more tense! Not to mention supernatural. You’ve gripped your readers, sister. We can’t wait to find out what happens next.
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Awww! Thank you brother!!! There are 2 more parts. 😉
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Even if her body is saved, I have to wonder whether her soul is going to want to return now that she’s been reunited with her lost love. Wonderful story. 🙂
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Aww. you surely captures the meaning of the story, Louise. Thank you for lending me your keen reader-eyes. ❤
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Oh dear, I think I share the same questions with everyone. This reminds me so much of Gayle Forman’s If I Stay. You got us hooked deariee!
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Oh wow! I so love If I Stay so I am happy to hear that dearie. Thank youuu! I think after reading the Part 3 the questions are answered na. 😉
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You know, I know you’re working on a poetry book but I look forward to your novel too, dearie!
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awwwww. a novel!!! hindi ko yata kaya yown. HAHA
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Kaya mo yan! Pak gay-on!! 😀
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HAHAHA! not yet. not yet.
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