The hands of this vintage clock have ticked and turned more than a thousand times.
Likewise my old heart has beat millions da-dums, da-dums.
And now they are both yours, my poetry’s rhythm and rhyme.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Rachel Crowe
In response to Sonya of Only 100 Words‘ Three Line Tales Week Thirty.
If you want to join, here are the simple rules:
- Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt.
- Link back to this post.
- Tag your post with 3LineTales (so we can find you in the Reader).
- Read and comment on other TLT participants’ lines.
- Have fun.
This is sweet…
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awwww. thank you! ❤
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Oh, wonderful!
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oh thank you dear love! ❤
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Of course!
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Lovely, fantastic. Many words I could use. Talented girl 🙂
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Awwww. Thank you dear Mandi! ❤
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Mandi, is right. It is more then excellent 🙂
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so sweet of you, Madeeha! ❤
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Oh Wowza-Wonderful!
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yay! thank youuu!
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Most welcome ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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xx00 ❤
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Beautiful!😊
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aww. thank you, Sonali! ❤
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Excellent poem, Rosema. I love the analogies 🙂
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oh thank you, Davy!
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Sweet! ♥
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awww. thank you, Saima!
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What a sweet piece 🙂 Beautiful
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thank you, Shaun! ❤
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Awesome lines!!!
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oh thank you! 🙂
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Lovely TLT!!
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aww. thank you PJ!!!
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😀 😀 😀
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Without both Rhythm and Rhyme
You have told it all
Have offered both
This is something innovative
An Awesome gift.
Cheers!
Shiva
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Awww. that’s a lovely poem, Shiva! thank you!
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Ahh! That’s a lovely poem of yours.
In two lines you have finished
I have extended the same in another few lines.
I just loved it.
Shiva
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ooh. you make it extra lovely. thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Muse! ❤
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You’re utmost welcome! 🙂
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wow this reads like a vow. It’s so touching!
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oooh. a vow! that’s true! 😀
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😀
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Awww this is beautiful. Made my heart da-dum da-dum.
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HAHA! Can hear it, Andrew!
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I appreciate two messages. One message for the one loved through the poem, who has received this astounding gift. The other message is to the readers. We are given your poetry as well, after all. Keep ticking and rhyming, sister!
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awww. your views are just priceless, brother! thank youuu!
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Simply beautiful, indeed. I love the flow of your thoughts, especially that da-dums, da-dums.. I can almost hear them ❤
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awww. thank you dearie!!!
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Always a pleasure, dearie. ^^
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❤ ❤ ❤
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