Today is our silver anniversary yet I know my wife thinks this day won’t bring anything special. Years after the economic crisis, my little art business is still trying to get up after a five-year continues fall. Simultaneously, our once in love hearts have been drifting apart. Love is essential, but money affects it in dire ways. In short, we are broke, financially and emotionally.
Gazing at the newly-painted building I bought with my personal savings, I whisper a prayer that this last effort will work. I hope Funky Munky will fix our pocket and of course our broken hearts.
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Word count: 100
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: TJ Paris
In response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) August 16, 2016.
Rules:
- a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less)
- each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end
- no serial (continuation) stories
- include a pingback to the challenge post
Thank you for hosting this awesome prompt, Priceless Joy!
Wow!
U r awesome as always!
Hey rosy!
Hru?
Has Nandita deleted her blog?
I cud not access!
Take care sweety
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thank you, dear Jyotee!
I am fine! How about you? ❤
Yes dear. She has. 😦
You take care too! 😀
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Nice job on this one!
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yay! thank you love! ❤
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😊😊💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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How sad that their marriage is drifting apart and they are so broke. I sure hope the Funky Munky store will heal their marriage and their pocket books! Lovely story, Rosey!
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YAY! thank you, PJ! 😀 😀 😀 This is a very nice photo prompt. 😀
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Thank you Rosey!!
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always welcome dear!
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Ah, life. Great write.
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thank you dear Muse! 😀
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Aww, I hope so too. With a name like Funky Munky, you can’t go wrong ❤
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YEAH! That name! HAHA Thank you dear Jade!
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Great story. Want to see how it plays out! ❤️
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thank you, lovely Momma! 😀 😀 😀
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A lot resting on Funky Munky, I hope it works out for them! Good work.
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i hope too! Thank you, Ian!
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This is Delightful!!!
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awww. thank you sissy!
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Most welcome!
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❤❤❤
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Aww! I hope so too. He’s so thoughtful. Beautiful story.
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awww. thank you dear!
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Aww what a lovely tale! I hope it worked
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me too! 😀 thank you dear Mel!!!
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You’re welcome 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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sweet story of him trying to mend all the brokenness i am cheering for him to succeed….gina
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Oh thank you very much, Gina! ❤
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The last sentence in each paragraph is clear, insightful, and moving. Of course, each is built upon everything that is said before. I’m rooting for the Funky in the Munky! Splendid storytelling, sister!
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oh wow. i am more than elated. 😀 thank you, brother!
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Always, you’re welcome. I hope your week is off to a good start, sister!
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have been sick but i am back! 😀 thank you, brother!
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I’m glad the narrator is still trying to save their marriage, that’s a hopeful sign!
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I agree! Thank you, Joy!
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Great writing Rosema! For both their sakes, I hope the Funky Munky business works out. I hope the couple makes money and is able to spend time much needed to help nurture and focus on their relationships. Although, I kind of have the feeling of the wife saying “Not this again!”
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I agree! 😀 😀 😀 I hope she will be impressed. 😀
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