The pregnant tree has never dared to let a sunray pass through its leaf-filled twigs, until the witty wind let out a happy sigh that made the stubborn tree dance for a while.
As the branches swayed with the wind, the rays has finally reached the tree’s inner soul. It was then it realized how it needed some sun to fill its gloomy, hidden holes.
Now let me tell you, I am the tree and you are my sun. And I am glad that I let you in.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: Unsplash, wocado.com
Word prompt: Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res (Thank you, dearest friend!)
Good one. So well written.
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too kind. 😀 thank you, Andrew! 😀
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I love the last lines. I’m glad she let him in too ^_^
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awww. thank you, Jade! 😀
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The last two lines…ahhh so beautiful
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thank you dear Mich! ❤
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Very nice!!
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thank you dear PJ! ❤
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Wow, resema reading the last line makes me smile. It is soft and captivating (:
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awww. thank you, Madeeha!
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My pleasure rosema, it is a beautiful piece of writing 🙂
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you are too sweet! 🙂
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I especially love the finale, sister 🙂
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awww. thank you sissy!
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Most welcome!!
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❤❤
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Beautiful!
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yay! Thank you, Sonali!
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This is delightful Rosema. I like it 😊
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yay! thank you, Jacq! 😀
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Thank God for the wind! This is adorable!
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yay! thank you, Gilda!
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My pleasure!
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Oh this is beautiful. I love the metaphors abs your turns of phrase
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aww, all inspired by the lovely word you generously shared with me! 😉
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You’re welcome 😊 any time you need a word, you who to call!
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I do! 😀 😀 😀
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And I love the end!
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yay! thank you! 😀
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You’re welcome 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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A delightful and romantic narrative, sister. It has the voice of a fable or a parable. There is no doubt, when reading, about what is described and what it means. Fair and fetching!
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Ooooh. a fable or a parable sounds a great compliment! Thank you, brother! 😀 Love the alliteration in your last line! 😀
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I think your skill with narrative is itself a compliment. I’m happy you like the alliteration!
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Awwww. Thank you, brother!
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Beautiful poem. I love the metaphor. I love how your speaker is “effulgent.”
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awww. thank you dear! 😀
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