The unforgiving sun bathing me with its flamed rays makes this journey even more excruciating. But I have to see her. I have to.
She was adamant to go first without me, but I insisted. I want to prove her that I can walk this long path alone, with just one limb. Sore and drenched in sweat, I almost regret she let me win. But I can see her looking at me, her little eyes cheering for me, waiting for me patiently.
Like an amulet, I gently caress the ring inside my pocket and resume limping towards my future wife.
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Word count: 100 words
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Adam Ickes
In response to Friday Fictioneers prompt for 12 August 2016.
Friday Fictioneers is a weekly writing challenge hosted by the generous Fairy Blog-Mother Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction.
Oh wow. 💕💕💕👏👏👏👏👏
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yay! thank you, S!!!!
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Always!
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did i mention already that i looooooove your instagram posts!!!! ❤
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Really? What username are you using? I miss so much. Lol
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it’s areadingwriter. 😀 been littering in your account. HAHA. forgive me.
it’s okay. 😉
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Okay I’ll look for you. The feed overflows at about 90 items (likes, comments, tags, and follows) so unless someone comments or sends a message I don’t even know they’re there. I apologize. 💕
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Woooow! You are one famous author and I surely know why. 😉 no worries. I understand. 😘😘😘
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Aw thank you. I don’t see that I’m famous. 😊😊💖
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That’s why you’re famous. You are soooooo humble. ❤❤❤
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Thank you, love. 😊😊
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always, love. ❤
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Powerful!
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thank you, Gilda! 😀
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❤️❤️❤️
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Yes!
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thank you, MW! ❤
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Awweeee! Ako’y kinikilig dearie. ❤
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awwww. mabuti naman! pambawi sa pagpatay sa apat na bata. 😀
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Wow! It is a lovely 100-word story. 🙂
Keep writing.
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thank you very much! 😀
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Very touching, great writing.
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oh wow! thank you!
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BTW, Ian. May i know your blog address? I am trying to visit you but i always get “this address is not available”. thanks!
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That’s worrying! Thanks for pointing that out, I will investigate. You should be able to find me at http://iainkellywriting.wordpress.com
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now it’s working, this is not the website thta was linked to you profile before. 🙂 i am glad i can visit you now. 🙂 thank you!
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A touching and powerful story Rosema. The pain we will go through in order to marry the person of our dreams 🙂 Have a great weekend.
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awwww. that is true. pain is less compared to love. ❤
you too, Davy! thank you for dropping by. 🙂
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Oh I do love this so very much–fiercely strong, about the human spirit and LOVE itself; and yet there’s a subtle exquisite quality….may be your best work, Rosey ❤
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Awwwwww. That is so sweet of you. ❤❤❤
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SO good.
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Awwww
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🙂 🙂 <3<3
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Kinilig ak don ha…
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Ohhhhhh. That’s tagalog!!!
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Yeah…☺
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how did you do that??? 😀 😀 😀
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Like others have already pointed out, this is a touching and powerful story, Rosema. I wish this couple a beautiful lifetime together ❤
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Awwwww. Thank you dear jade! They said thank you to you, too!!! ❤❤❤
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Awww, this is wonderful!!
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awww. thank you dear PJ! 😀
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There is a story here to tell. I mean, you tell it. But the possibilities of what happened before and what will happen next are so inviting. Sister, you leave us wanting more. Which is what good work does!
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Wow. Thank you for such an insightful comment. Indeed in every present story, there is the past and the future. 🙂
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Bahhhh THE FEELS ❤
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i agreee! 😀 😀 😀 thank you!
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You captured perseverance’s best side. I hope he makes it!
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i think he might because that’s what love can do. 😉 thank you, dear!
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You’re welcome 🙂 Maybe there will be a follow up piece letting us see that?
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ooooh. i am not sure. 😀 😀 😀
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Please?
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uh oh. can i let my friend down?? I’m afraid i can’t. -_-
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When inspiration strikes write it. I’ll be here. There’s no hurry
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yay! thank you! 😀
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You’re welcome 😊
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You could do a series of poems or short stories exploring this
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oooh. that would be a great idea. 😀
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It’ll make for an interesting read
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I love the ghost theme you have running through your most recent posts. They feel connected.
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ooooh. i did not notice that! 😀
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🙂 I only noticed it because I read the posts back to back 😉
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ooooooh. 😀
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🙂
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Dear Rosema,
She believed in him. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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yes. that is why he will believe too. 🙂
Thank you, Ms. Rochelle. 🙂
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Interesting piece. He is walking towards his bride, but he’s proving to her by how he walks towards her, he is a good fit, a worthy husband. The ring for her, is something he draws strength from. Wonderful.
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Yes! You got it all right, Mandi! That’s on point! 😀 Thank you!
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This is so uplifting, the narrator’s persevering against all odds and being rewarded with the one he loves. Beautiful story.
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yay! thank you! 😀
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