my heart
still screams
your name,
though mind
says we’ll never
be the same.
your mind’s
now filled
with fame,
true love’s
now not
your heart’s game.
mind tries
hard to
keep sane,
while my heart
still screams
your name.
—
04.07.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: Unsplash
powerful write.
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Oh thank you!!
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Oh wow. Reminds of the movie Begin Again (i think that’s the title) with Mark Ruffalo and Kiera Knightley. 😊
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Oooooh!!! That is soooo nice to knowm 😍😍😍
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I love this poem! The rhyming is fantastic, and the repetition of the first and last few lines work so well. The first stanza is definitely my favorite; there’s something so heartbreaking and relatable about a heart unable to move on, even though the mind knows it’s over. Such a beautiful and poetic way to describe the constant struggle between the heart and the mind ❤
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Awww. Thank you for one insightful comment dear Jade! ❤❤❤ i appreciate it. ❤❤❤
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Beautiful…🌹
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Awww. Thank you!
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Awww. Beautiful piece and heartbreaking….
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Aww. Thank you, Ameena. ❤❤❤
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This reminds me of Begin Again movie, Keira knightley had similar feelings. Lovely 🙂
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ooooh. haven’t watched that movie yet. 😀 thank you, Sneha!
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Powerful and fierce, yes–and I relate to screaming someone’s name with passion.
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ooooh. so my sister have done it too. ❤ thank you, sissy! 😀
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Yes–you’re most welcome ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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A beautiful piece to re-read and ponder over the weekend. Thank you for writing and posting Rosema and enjoy your weekend.
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thank you for the kind words, Davy! 😀 I really appreciate them. I hope you had a great week! 😀
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Very much rhyming with meaning! 🙂
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yay! thank you, Swati!
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Wow what a haunting write. Moving on is hard. The heart doesn’t ever forget.
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i agree!!! every love digs a hole in our hearts. geez.
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Yes they do, some deeper than others 😦
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yeah… i feel you there my friend.
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Wish that weren’t so
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awww.
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🤔
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Awesome. Absolutely awesome.
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yay! thank you, Andrew!
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