I’m no hopeless romantic. My mind has always won over my heart, making it always realistic. I don’t look forward to forever. I choose to relish what I have today. I don’t believe in love at first sight. I believe love is a constant, daily fight. I never thought I would fall for you. Actually, I do not want to. I always dreamed of loving someone I barely knew. Someone that is not you.
But time, fate connived
like a tree’s last leaf, I fall.
Our story was born.
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Back story: This is a non-fiction account of my own love life. 😀 My almost six-year boyfriend is actually a childhood friend. And… the haibun above says it all. ❤
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In response to dVerse‘s Haibun Monday: A Little Romance by Toni of kanzen sakura. Read her own haibun here.
Hi! Happy Haibun Monday to you all. I hope you all have your heartsready to pen a romantic haibun. I think we all have romance in common: a first romance, unrequited, summer love, lost love, forever love…
You can write this easily. Remember, a haibun is not a work of fiction, it is true. So please share with us a romantic episode or time of your life.
Our romances are like a movie or the most mundane ordinary thing in the world. I want you to please think and pull out your best romantic (or funniest or saddest) haibun ever. Please give me one or two tight paragraphs with a true classic haiku at the end – nature based with a cutting or pivot in the second line. The count will be 5-7-5 but some do write short-long-short.
“like a tree’s last leaf, I fall.” – sigh. Beautiful.
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Hi Ghizmo! Thank you very much for your lovely comment!
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aww…this is a beautiful story! I love that it’s autobiographical!
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thank you, Mel! He is full smile whenever he told people/friends how I hated him before and how he made me fall. HAHA
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aw it sounds like a cute story 🙂 you’re welcome
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yeah. he said he want me to tell more but nah. haha. 😀 thanks, Mel!
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You have to keep some mysteries eh? 😉
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not really. it’s because our story is against me and in favor of him. HAHA. he always said the summary of our story is that i swallowed my words. HAHA
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Maybe he’ll swallow his later in your courtship 😉
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i hope so! 😀
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Me too
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😀
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Ohhh.. this is beautiful and interesting.. i should write one
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thank you, Mich! Will be reading yours, soon!
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I wish I had that happy ending. Beautiful, dear. 💕
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aww. i wish the same for you. ❤ ❤ ❤ thank you!
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Hi just tried my version of haibun.. check it out… thanks by the way
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If you are interested in joining us, the haibun is a Japanese poetic form based on the travelogue of Basho. It is prosimetric and is written in tight paragraphs ended with a nature based classical haiku rather than a micropoem or senryu. You can also read the other linked poems to get an idea of how to write a haibun. I hope you will join us and enjoy reading. Best regards, Toni
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Thanks a lot will check it out myself
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i will, Mich! 😀
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This is what I love about haibun – they are not works of fiction and so we get the most glorious truths from them. The haiku is most excellent and perfectly expands on the prose. What a happy read!
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Thank you, Toni! 🙂 I have written several haibuns already but I missed the fact that it should not be fiction. So thank you for the info. 😉
And for the lovely prompt who finally made me spill the beans about my love life. 🙂
P.S.
It was nice meeting you, Toni!
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Awweeee… I’m swooned! ❤ I, too, believe love is a constant, daily fight. Too sweet, dearie!!
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thank you dearie! the prompt begs for something sweet and true. now boyfie is in cloud nine. HAHA
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I know… and you’re too generous to share your sweet, romantic thoughts. I’m sure he is. He MUST, dear. 😀
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Yeah. He is, dearie! HE wants me to tell more. 😀
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Hahaha!! Ayeee. Go on, spoil him with sweetness dear… ❤️❤️❤️
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nope. i won’t. ayoko nga. HAHA
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Haha. Puma-pakipot kay boyfie?
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HAHA! Medyo. HAHA
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Oh, so beautiful!
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Thank you dear Sarah! 😀
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Of course! 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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I imagine love fought for every day (as long as the fight is hale) becomes love forever. You’ll have to let me know. Sister, the haibun blends nature with human will so effectively. The last leaf fell: “Our story was begun.” I wonder if the leaf, then, becomes the first page in your love story!
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Aww. I think that leaf is indeed the title page. HAHA 😀
I will surely let you know, brother! Thank you!
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For your prose, I like the rhyme at the end. It is a very sweet and cute piece.Very nicely written. I love your haiku. Love the line: like a tree’s last leaf, I fall.
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Hi Victoria! Thank you for your kind comment and for reading this piece. 🙂 Nice e-meeting you, too!
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Same here. My pleasure!
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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A delightful story, a pleasure to read. It sounds as if you have learned to like what you thought you didn’t want!
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Thank you very much, Rosemary! Yes. 😀 I learned that! 😀
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“I’m no hopeless romantic…”
How about just a smidgeon? That is so sweet that your BF is also your childhood friend. Love that blooms from a solid foundation is so strong. Thank you for sharing this gem with us/me. More please. ❤
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yes! smidgeon it is. 😀
Yeah. He will be grinning once he read this piece because he is always soooo proud that he have me despite my hate for him. Not childhood friend, it’s childhood enemy. 😀 hAHA
Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment, Lonna! ❤
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You are so cute. What is that famous quote? I believe it’s by Sun Tzu in The Art of War (don’t quote my source)…”Keep your friends close; but keep your enemies even closer.” *wink* So, I’d say a childhood enemy is a promotion to a childhood friend. Ha ha ha…
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HAHAHAHA! This will make him laugh…
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Delightful. Love does chip away at one’s preconceptions, doesn’t it?
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Yes, it does. 🙂 Thank you for reading!
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Beautiful words Rosema and thank you for introducing me to the Haibun.
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you are welcome, Davy! and thank you, too! 🙂 it is one great form to write.
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Woooohhh this post made me hope, and think for an awesome possibilities. This is truly inspiring.
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Glad to hear that! 😀 Nothing’s impossible. 😉
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I love this post and your blog
You can also check out my blog 😃
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Thank you, Marquay! I will. 🙂
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You’re welcome and thank you too 😁
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❤ ❤ ❤
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I also believe in this: I believe love is a constant, daily fight.
Loving your tree’s last leaf, I fall, haiku.
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Thank you very much, Grace! 🙂 dVerse has helped me write some lovely pieces. And the community is so warm. ❤
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I love this!
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thank you dear PJ! 😀
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Your haibun made me swoon. This has the magic of falling in love bit by bit without the protagonists knowing it. Your story is all the more special because it was not driven by emotion. 😊💕
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Awww. Thank you very much Imelda. 🙂 Your words are a delight to receive. 😉
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You’re welcome, Rosemarie. 🙂 It was my pleasure to read.
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awww. you’re so sweet. ❤
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I think romance based on friendship is the strongest, has the best chance of enduring. The haiku tells your story so well.
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Thank you very much, Victoria. 🙂 It is a delight to see you here. ❤
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This was wonderful!
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thank you very much, Nicholas! 🙂
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Great story of a great romance. ❤️
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awww. thank you, Momma! ❤
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Lovely! That leaf that is so reluctant to fall still gives in eventually. The haiku is a great metaphor to sum up your story.
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Hi Bryan! Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment! I appreciate it. 😉
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To fight for love..
To endure the scrapes of love..
To fight for love..
is to say and FeeL more than Love..
Love scrapes by..
liFe
rates..:)
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ooooh. wow. i am honored to get such a poetic comment, Katie! ❤ Thank you very very much. ❤
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My pleaSure
FriEnd.. Thanks
For the inspiraTioN..:)
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aww. thank you, Katie. ❤
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:)..:)
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Oh Sister–I’m swooning…..
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Aww. Thank you! This is me and Joseph.
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I know, I suspected it was and it was confirmed by what you said ❤
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Yessssss. That’s his favorite story!
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Ohhh…I’m sure it is 🙂
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yes! 😀 😀 😀
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🙂
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And that is the power of love..leading our hearts around… even without our consent!
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that is so true. our hearts have that power! Thank you, Mish! 🙂
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