Surrounded by girls
tattooed and almost naked
with eyes only on you.
Sweaty sexy rock
you played effortlessly
like it’s your sole due.
Supposed I wasn’t one
of those sassy lasses, yet
I’m also crazy for you.
—
04.02.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: Unsplash
A Reading Writer 
Great poem!
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yay! thank you dear PJ! 😀 😀 😀
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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how is your summer, dear? 🙂 I believe it is still summer in US? 🙂
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Yes, it is still summer. It has been a nice summer so far! I hope it continues. 🙂
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awww. i am glad it is not too hot?? you have hit the beach already? 😀
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It’s been hot but I have been able to stay cool. I live a long way away from the beach. 😦
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ouuuuuuch. but atleast you are enjoying summer with some humming birds? 🙂
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I have so many hummingbirds, Rosey! They are running me ragged. I’m having to fill up the feeders every day! I have 2 – 4 cup feeders; 2 – 3 cup feeders; and 1 – 2 cup feeder. That’s a lot of nectar and they are going through it every day!!
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WOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!! Can I see them, can I see?????
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If I can figure out how to video with my phone and put it on the Internet. LOL! There is usually about 8-12 of them feeding at the feeders at the same time.
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Geeeeez! That would be great and that’s a looooooot!!! I believe it is delighting to watch them!
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They really are delightful to watch!
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awwww. i hope you can have some videos or photos. 😀 but no pressure. i am just excited to see because i’ve never seen one ever. 😀
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You have never seen a hummingbird? They are little tiny birds with long beaks that look like short straws. I have a picture of one if I can find it. I will post it (if I can find it).
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i have seen in the internet but not in real life. 🙂
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That’s too bad they don’t come to the Phillipines. They leave here for the south in September. It starts getting to cold for them.
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i think there are some here but they are rare. 😀
Ohhhhhh.. so they are your summer companion. 🙂
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Oh, so you all do get some there! That’s great! 🙂 🙂
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yes. i am not sure where, though. 😀 😀 😀
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Cool write.
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thank you, Andrew! 😀
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Your word choice here is excellent. We can see the crowd (even without the image) and the one who’s not like the rest–yet who feels strongly the same way. Sophisticated work, sister!
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oooh. thank you for affirming my goal, to be visually vivid. 🙂 you are wise, brother!
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Wow. 💕
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yay! thank you, love! 😀
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Of course! 😊 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Vivid Imagination! Cool. 😀
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yay! thank you, Oba! 😀
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Ooh… who is this guy? Haha. I love this dearie!
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hmmmm. lemme get his name for you. 😉
thanks, dearie!!!
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Hahaha! Lemme know when you have it! I will look him up. 😉
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HAHAHA! okay!! this is not Mr. Grey for sure!
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this the running commentary has looped through my head at a concert or two! 😉
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HAHAHAHA! yeah!!!! we love concerts, eh? 😀
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yes!
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😀
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Great poem. I can picture this guy, oh so compelling with a beautiful voice and colourful tattoos. I don’t think a woman alive could resist staring, caught in the moment. And probably better not to be one of his groupies lol.
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HAHAHA! You imagined him so well, Mandi! I can sense you have someone in mind. (Kidding! :D)
Thank you!
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Haha maybe 🙂
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ooh. name him! HAHA (sorry, too nosy!)
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So many fantasies….
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that is true, sister.
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🙂
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