Elusive Words: A Tanka
Couple
that might have been
if we’re both brave enough
to say the words left unsaid– but
we’re not.
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03.31.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: Unsplash
I write because I read. I read because I write.
Ahhh its sad…
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yeah. i agree. Thank you!
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Gosh, isn’t this the truth in so many failed relationships!?
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i guess it is, PJ. Lack of communication does destroy relationships.
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Yes, it sure does! Every couple really needs to strive to communicate with each other.
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i agree, aside from love, words are the key to maintaining relationships, too.
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Yes, you are right!
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Thank you for reading this, PJ! 😀 And for sharing your wise thoughts!
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And you for sharing your wise thoughts! 🙂
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aww. you are giving me too much credit. 😉
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Communication is the devil in a relationship. Lucky for him (a.k.a. hubz), I’m quite loquacious! He says he mentally checks out all the time! >_< Lovely poem, my dear!
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HAHAHAHA! I can sense you two are a perfect pair! 😀 😀 😀
Thank you dear Lonna!
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He’s alright. ~>_<~ It's a good thing he's not reading this, or I'm in trouble.
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Uh oh 😀
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Love this, beautifully expressed. ❤
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oh thank you, Elizabeth! 🙂
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Isn’t that just the sad truth of it all, sigh. Short and sweet is your strength 🙂
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awww. you are too kind!!! thank you, Jade!
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I’ve been there. Sigh. Great job!
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ouch. Thank you, Jenn!
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oh my, this one’s a heartbreaker. Courage comes in all forms.
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ouch! yes! you are right. if there is a well for courage i think there will be a long queue for it.
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Or maybe there are many wells? 😉
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yeah!!! maybe there are. inside each an everyone of us. 🙂
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Yes! I believe there is!
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yeah! 😀
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🙂
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NIcely done but tragically sad.
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aww. thank you, Andrew. I think I am better with sad tales. 😉
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I wasn’t familiar with this shorter Tanka style–very interesting! The poem–sad, and yet, how do we know that maybe it was God’s plan of protection that they didn’t become a couple?
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yes. That is so true. It’s like everything happens for a reason. We might get hurt but maybe it is part of the plan. 🙂
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I used to feel so disappointed when things didn’t work out as I’d hoped–but I’ve sure learned the lesson that God always knows best 🙂
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yes! me too, sister! right now. I am kind of afraid to step. I am planning, and thinking of coming up with my own book. But I cannot do the first step. too afraid.
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Oh wow, sister–this is Very Exciting news!! Is it a novel? I have total confidence it will be a success–just trust God for each step, and you’ll be fine!!! ❤
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I am not sure if it is a novel. The idea sparked last night. I was just going to compile my poems in a book when it suddenly popped!
Thank you my dear sister! ❤
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Ooooh, a poetry book!!! Very exciting!!!!
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yes, sister. am still undecided, though. 🙂
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That’s fine–it’s a great idea to ponder 🙂
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A poem hauntingly well said, of words left unsaid.
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oh wow. thank you for the lovely words, Gilda. Yes. sometimes words unsaid destroy a couple, or a couple that might have been.
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Poem fits either scenario, yes! And so very true. You’re welcome.
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Yay! Thank you dear!!
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Poor snails. They move slowly. Maybe they could eventually say the words? Thank you for this sweet song, sister.
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The snails thank you for noticing them, brother! 🙂 And I thank you for the lovely words! 🙂
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