Constellate: A Crapsey Cinquain*
Bodies
from two to one,
fused, bonded, tied, combined,
‘neath heaven, ‘bove earth, makes one more
human.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
*Crapsey Cinquain, one of the most popular modern variations of the cinquain was created by the American poet Adelaide Crapsey, 1897-1914. In 1909 Ms Crapsey became interested in Japanese poetry. In her study notebook she lists tanka and haiku translations from which she developed a set form which she called the “Cinquain”. In some poetic circles this form is referred to as the Crapsey or Crapsey Cinquain, in others, particularly on-line it is simply referred to as a Cinquain. (The latter could be misleading since technically the term “cinquain” is defined as any poem or stanza which is 5 lines.
Crapsey Cinquain is:
- a stand-alone poem, a complete poem in 5 lines. It can be written in a chain, but each cinquain should be able to stand alone.
- syllabic lines in a pattern of 2-4-6-8-2 syllable per line. The original poems were mostly iambic.
- often composed with a reflective theme
- unrhymed.
- always titled. The title almost acts as a 6th line.
beautiful poem, celestial and passionate at the same time 🙂
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celestial. that is one great word, Mel! Thank youuuu!
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You’re welcome 🙂 There’s also ‘Welkin’ which is the vault of heaven 🙂
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Ooooooh. That’s a nice word!!!
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Thought you’d like it 😉
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you like me well!!! 😀 😀 😀
And I am done with the word prompts that you gave! 😀
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🙂 Yay! Me too. I just need to figure out which of the 3 posts worth of prompts to use for the rest of the month. I think I have a hundred prompts collected so far!
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WOOOOOOOW! I would love to know them but maybe that’s for September! My August posts are already ready. 😀
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🙂 That’s fine! Do them whenever 🙂 That’s awesome that you have yours done for the month. I wanted to do the same but life has gotten in the way of that plan
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yeah! i am kinda OC about my posts. 😀 And i never know when work will happen so i come prepared. Also… that planned book is slowly coming into light. ❤
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I am too for the same reason 🙂 Great minds!
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agree! 😀
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Beautifully written. Love the thought.
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thank you Andrew. this is one lovely word. 🙂
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Ahhh, so lovely!
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yay! thank you dear PJ! ❤
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Wow… that was awesome. Said so much in so little words!
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Hi there! thank you very much! 🙂
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Aww, there’s a lot of love in this poem 🙂
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yay! last month has been cheesy for me, eh? 😀 thank you, Jade!
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This is lovely!
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thank you dear Muse!
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You’re most welcome, Rosema. 🙂
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Beautiful… lovely words! 🙂
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thank you dear Iris! 😀
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Welcome,Rose 🙂
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LOVE your lines, and the photo too ❤ And agree with Melinda's comment, yes!
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yay! thank you dear sissy!!! 😀
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Most welcome–how do we say that in Tagalog?
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you’re welcome is “walang anuman”, sister. 😀
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Oooooh, I love it–thank you!!!!! oops, I mean “salamat”! Also, I may have made an incorrect assumption when I said Tagalog–please correct me if I’m wrong 🙂 (I just read a quick thing that said the Filipino language has other dialects aside from Tagalog.)
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Yes! That is right. The main language is Tagalog and there are thousands more dialect. 😀
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Ahh, good–thanks for helping me learn!!
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you are most welcome, dearest sissy!
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How’s your Facebook page going? You’re going to be even busier, keeping that up!! 🙂
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i am slowly uploading photos. 🙂 But I am not really hard on myself on that page. WP is still my first love. 😀
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Oh that’s good to know…I was thinking you might abandon your blog!
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NO!! that will never happen, sister! As long as you are here with me. 😉
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Whew! and YAAAAYYY!!
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One more beautiful poem and heart-stopping picture to go with! Word High July is almost through. Thanks for taking me on this wonderful ride. It’s been great fun!
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yay! thank you for your sweet words, Gilda! I hope you enjoyed the ride!
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Definitely! 🙂
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😀 😀 😀
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The math works on many levels. Two become one. “[M]akes one more/human.” Two become one human. Two together make each one more human. This verse makes us ponder, sister!
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Oooooh! This is a creatively done comment, brother! Thank you very much!!!
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I’m back from having been away to see family. Lots of catching up to do. Happy August! I did make a point of reading your work while I was traveling. What can I say? Your verse picks me up, sister! I hope maybe you’re having a good week so far.
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Awwww. That is so sweet of you, brother! I am more than delighted to know that you are back! I think having a break is necessary, right? 🙂
You have a blessed month, brother!
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