Melancholy: A Musette*
I’ve tried
melancholy,
I died.
You gave
me bliss for free,
I’m saved.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
*The Musette is an invented verse form that presents the challenge of writing in very short lines. This form was introduced by Emily Romano and found only at Shadow Poetry. The Musette is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of tercets.
- syllabic, 2-4-2 2-4-2 2-4-2 syllables per line.
- rhymed axa bxb cxc etc. x being unrhymed.
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yay! thank youuuu! ❤
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Always! 😊
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interesting that melancholy saved. That’s turning sadness on its head!
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yay! love the poetic comment, Mel! Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Awesome work!
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thank you, Alok! 😀
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Nice!!
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thank you dear PJ!!
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Interesting poem. Definitely takes a few reads to really decipher it.
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thank you, Jade! maybe i was a bit unclear? 😀
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Not necessarily. I think a little vagueness in poetry is a good thing 😉
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that is good to hear, Jade. 😉
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I LOVE your Musette!!!!!!
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yay! thank you, sister!! 😀
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Most welcome always ❤
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Love this
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thank you, Andrew!
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Wonderful to be saved. Nice one Rosema.
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indeed! thank you, Mandi!
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“I’ve tried/melancholy, . . .” So sensibly yet artistically put. Tried it, set it down. Got something much better to go with. Great hopefulness in this musette, sister!
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Thank you very much, brother!!!
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