Pahimakas
The day you said the last goodbye
felt like the end of entire I.
The curse of love not returned,
dawned on me like waves unnerved.
Years after you said your last words,
I’m still unsure if I regret,
that I pulled the trigger
after you confessed you love her.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: BuzzFeed, Unsplash
In response to Word-High July: 30 Beautiful Filipino Words: Day 26 – Pahimakas.
Awesome piece!
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yay! thank you, Muse!
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You did kill someone! And the body count rises…poignant poem with one hell of an ending! 🙂
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So I forgot the poem I wrote for Pahimakas and read it again and yeah! I killed someone! HAHAHA
Thank you, Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂 You sound very happy about that 😉
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yeah! I do sound. HAHAH. I think I have to see a psych now? HAHA
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only if you do so in a poem or a short story and let us watch what enfolds!
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HAHAHAHA! Thank you, Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Hello Sweetie, I’m missed ya! I came back to this potent poem. Ahhh…lyrical and lovely, with a tinge of danger. Love it!!
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Oh wow! What a dark welcome back poem for you, dear! Missed you tooooo! 😀 Will visit you soon!
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The lyrical feel of the words definitely hides the danger of the poem. Well done 🙂
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yay! you again saw that, dear Jade! Thank you! 😀
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Wow, Pow-er-full!!
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yay!!! love the FIERCE comment, dearest!
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Yes, I know how you love Fierce! :):) Till I met you, I didn’t realize what a great word it is!
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awwww. that’s too sweet of you to say!
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It’s true! Sometimes we associate words–which may be quite common–with a person who uses them in a special way, or just because the person is special to us ❤ (There can be negative associations too–but not in this case!)
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Yes. I agree. 🙂 That’s how love can affect us, I think. ❤
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Yes, I agree 🙂
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yay! 😀 ❤ How are you now sister?
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God and I had a splendid day!!! Wish you were here–I made smothered okra again (with beef and bacon in it)!! And mounds of rice–yummmmm!
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AWWWWWWWWWWW! That sounds… geeeez. DELICIOUS!!!
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I’m going to eat some for you, hahahhaha!!!! ❤
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That ending though …..
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Hi Ism! Yes. That ending! 😀
Good morning to you and thank youuuuu for the award! ❤ I will drop by soon dear. But I am sorry as this blog is already an award free blog. BUT!! Please know that i truly appreciate it. ❤
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Welcome 😊
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❤
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and that’s sad! huhu Anyway, it’s my first to be acquianted with the word “Pahimakas”. I learn something new today! So thaaaaaaaank you ♥
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Yay! Glad to hear that my dear! 😀 😀 😀 I don’t know that word before too! 😀 Thank you!
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I understand that sentiment completely! Great job, Rosema. 🙂
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Thank you my friend! ❤
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You’re welcome, my friend. 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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One body bag coming right up! A heartbreaking piece overflowing with grim, dearie! So well done!
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HAHAHAHA! The opening line cracked me up, dearie! HAHAHA
Thank you very much! (for the body bag and for the comment. HAHAH)
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A serial killer Rosema, do I need to dust off my Detectives badge? A dark and beautifully crafted poem. The words and image are very striking.
Here is my take on Pahimakas.
https://davydblog.com/2016/07/26/pahimakas/
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Yes! I think your detective skills are needed, Davy!
Thank you very much for you kind words. 🙂
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The tie and suit are back on and the badge polished and ready for action lol.
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HAHAA! Let’s get it on!!
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The image of the pistol on the ground is telling. It scares me just thinking of such a thing happening. I am in love with the granddaughter of a woman who hunted one man and years later shot another. I have no doubt my child bride would not miss.
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Oh wow! Yeah. So you better be careful, David! 😀
Thank you for sharing!
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rosemawrites, where do you find these words?! Are they Latin? I would like to know the entomology, derivation, etc….
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mfdpensonpi
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Thanks! I love these!
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I see that they are Filipino in derivation. Absolutely lovely! Keep it up!
Beautiful poems…
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Yay! Thank you very much! 🙂
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Hi there Myra! 🙂 These are Filipino words. 🙂
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There’s a movie in here, sister. Of course, a true tragedy when real. I suppose this happens. I appreciate your use of rhyme with subtleness to engage the reader.
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Oh thank you, brother! I can’t stop but blush because of your wise and flattering words. 🙂 ❤
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It’s your work. And it’s great!
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oh thank you!
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[…] So it was a pretty relaxed craft night. At about 8:45 we split our ways and said goodnight. […]
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Yikes! So much more to this story? Great teaser!
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Yay! That would be a great idea! 😀 thank you!
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Looking forward to it!
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yay! 😀
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A violent ending but perhaps, the central figure felt it was just for the lover her man hid from her, to end up dead. Or perhaps, she didn’t think, in anger she just shot her gun?
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Yeah. I think it is her anger, Mandi!
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Ah, crime of passion. Second degree murder, unplanned. Great job 🙂
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you got that right! 😀 you can be detective or lawyer Mandi! 😀
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