Dalisay
As pure as the fresh water
of the running stream,
as pure as a baby’s voice’s
first time scream,
that is you and your love
‘fore you learned the word drugs.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Photo credit: BuzzFeed, Unsplash
In response to Word-High July: 30 Beautiful Filipino Words: Day 24 – Dalisay.
So vivid. So beautiful. 💕
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awww. thank you, Sarah!
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Awww, what a heartbreaking ending… I hope he remembered those days of purity and snaps right back, 🙂
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Yes! 🙂 I have the same hopes too. Drugs can really destroy a lot. Sadly.
Thank you, Ameena!
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Shocker at the end my friend. But it is true for some people and I have had friends experience this in a way when they were younger. A couple of them L and H dated guys who were really into smoking weed. I remember having a conversation with L in the girls washroom on my 21st bday, she was so frustrated. She liked this guy Chad a lot,but he was always smoking up and when she asked him to easy, he wouldn’t. She asked him if the drugs were more important than her. Sadly he answered, they were his number one poetry. She broke up with him. Hopefully, in 10 years since, he’s gotten his priorities together.
And sorry, this is going to be a long comment. I’m wondering Rosema if you would allow me to send you writer/poet interview questions, so I can include you in my interview series I do every two-weeks. Perhaps, I could give you interview questions now so you could return them to me by the third week of August, so I can feature you at the beginning of September? Let me know if you have the time. My email is mandi_ae@hotmail.com. Thanks.
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Hi there dear Mandi! Thank you very very much for sharing that story. I do hope ge has gotten his priorities together already. 🙂
About the questions. I am more than delighted to participate! Your interview series has been a delight to read and it really makes me know more about my author friends, here! 😀 Thank you very much for asking me. 🙂 ❤ Will email you soon!
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You’re welcome Rosema. I’m excited to interview you. Do you want to send me an email at my email address mandi_ae@hotmail.com, so I have your email to send the interview questions to?
Thanks
Yeah, I hope Chad is doing better now. Some of his friends ended up doing well despite their addictions, so one hopes 🙂
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I have emailed you already. 🙂 And I received your reply too! 😀
I am glad to hear that! 🙂
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A tragic and cautionary verse that starts beautifully, as it should, and then changes, as it must. Moving work, sister.
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Wow! love the poetic comment, brother! Thank you very much!!!
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Love this! SO creative and beautiful!♡♡
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awww. thank you, Sheridan!! 😀
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Loved your take Rose.
https://summerstommy.com/2016/07/24/word-high-july-dalisay/
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Thank you, Michael!!!
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Oh gosh, fierce ending–such terrible heartbreak.
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Oh dear. Yes. Drugs is a nefarious thing the destroys life.
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Nefarious is exactly right–I see the destruction in neighbors.
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ouch. that is sad. there is a wide campaign here against drugs, too. a lot of users and pushers have been killed already.
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Probably no country is immune to the devastation of drug use, trafficking and drug wars. So sad.
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Yes. It’s unfortunate. We are blessed encountered Him and fall on this trap called drugs.
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This ends with such a sad twist. Great work, Rosema. 🙂
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i agree, Suz. Drugs destroys, sadly.
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Yes, they do. Our extended family has been touched by this over the years. The children pay dearly when their parents are into drugs and drinking. 😦
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That is so true. -_- How nefarious drugs are.
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A strong message, and sad.
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i agree, David! Thank you!
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What a twist! So sad at the end….the siren song, the lure of the thrill……such a trail of broken hearts drugs …leave behind all those who love you…
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oh what a lovely comment, girl. Indeed I agree. Drugs destroys.
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It’s all too common. A sad, sad fate.
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i agree. *sigh*
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Rosema, an excellent and emotive take on Dalisay.
Here is my offering for today.
https://davydblog.com/2016/07/24/dalisay/
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oh wow. thank you, Davy!
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Writing of pure beauty.
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awww. that’s too much! 😀
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Wonderfully written!
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oh dear. thank you very much!! 😀
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You’re most welcome.
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[…] was a great time to be a kid, and it was so pure and innocent. None of these computer games, staring at a phone or tablet. Sometimes I wish the clock could go […]
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beautiful poetic definition 🙂
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awww. thank you, Mel!
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🙂 You’re welcome
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Thought-provoking piece, dearie. Ah, this reminds me of the MMK I watched before. Sigh.
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yeah. the drug addict husband who killed his partner’s eldest child?
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