Crevasse: A Cinquino*
I made
a nest inside a beating crack
without knowing it was
your own sinking
soul’s hole.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
*Cinquino is seems to me is a gimmicky invented verse form that reverses the syllable count of the Crapsey Cinquain. It was found in a book on poetry for teachers and was created by a 20th century American educator James Neille Northe.
The Cinquino is:
- a poem in 5 lines.
- syllabic, 2-8-6-4-2 syllables per line.
- unrhymed
Oh my, a sinking soul–that can’t be good!
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Yes. Can’t really be good!
Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Wow, this was superb. To me, it felt like falling in love with someone who is on a bit of a downward moment in life… Hopefully we can help uplift their soul though!
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You got that so right. Falling in love with someone broken. Maybe he/she can make her/him whole again!
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Well it came across beautifully!
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Oh. Thank you! ❤
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Nice
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Thank you, Andrew!
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The title is a lovely word to read and say. The poem creates a scene I can imagine–seeking security in a warm and heart-“beating” place, only to find emotional darkness and danger. Refined work, sister!
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Oh. You summarized this short piece so well, brother! thank you!
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WOW WOW WOW–power-packed poem, and I do love the Cinquino form 🙂
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yay! thank you dear, Sissy!! 😀 😀 😀 five lines are my fave too! 😀
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Yaayy–you’re welcome!
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❤ ❤ ❤ 🙂
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🙂
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Wow, so good 😀
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oh you are too kind! 😀 Thank you!
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