Melodious

Posted on July 17, 2016July 11, 2016 by areadingwriter

Melodious: A Miku*

Rhythmic sighs
and in sync heartbeats—
our first night.

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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)

Abbreviated Haiku is written in either 2 lines with syllable count 7/2 or 3 lines with syllable count 3/5/3 or 2/3/2. This is sometimes called Miku*.

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30 thoughts on “Melodious”

Eccentric Muse July 17, 20169:00 pm Reply

simply beautiful!

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20166:54 am Reply
  
  aww. thank you!
  
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  1. Eccentric Muse July 19, 201612:18 am
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
    
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jacquelineobyikocha July 17, 20169:57 pm Reply

Relaxing 😊

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20166:54 am Reply
  
  awww. thank you dear!
  
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thesarahdoughty July 18, 201612:47 am Reply

Oh wow. 💕 💕 💕 💕

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20167:26 am Reply
  
  thank youuuu, Sarah!! 😀 😀 😀
  
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  1. thesarahdoughty July 18, 20167:32 am
    
    You’re very welcome!
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 18, 20168:56 am
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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Sneha July 18, 20163:19 am Reply

Your posts about these different types of Poetry /Haiku is informative

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20167:24 am Reply
  
  thank you, Sneha! I am glad to share them with you. 🙂
  
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clcouch123 July 18, 20165:10 am Reply

I like the photo. And the name Miku. More importantly, the verse is appealing. The alternate s and t sounds to me sound like passion as it happens. You recreate the rhythm of the lovers. Lovingly done, sister!

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20167:21 am Reply
  
  oh dear. there goes your insights again! 😀 thank you, brother! may i continue to have your words. 🙂 ❤
  
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  1. clcouch123 July 18, 201610:15 am
    
    Sure, you’ll get my words. As long as I get yours. Deal?
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 18, 20161:19 pm
    
    DEAL! 😀
    
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Shadeau July 18, 20168:09 am Reply

Ooooh….ooh ooh ooh…. 🙂

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1. rosemawrites July 18, 20168:47 am Reply
  
  yay! thank you, dear! 😀 😀 😀
  
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  1. Shadeau July 18, 201610:26 am
    
    Most welcome–wowwwwww ❤
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 18, 20161:20 pm
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
    hey that's a lot of wows already! 😀
    
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  3. Shadeau July 18, 20163:04 pm
    
    I like to do wow’s!!
    
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  4. rosemawrites July 18, 20163:25 pm
    
    aw. and i actually love receiving them from you! ❤
    
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  5. Shadeau July 18, 20164:30 pm
    
    They’re easy and free!
    
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  6. rosemawrites July 18, 20165:55 pm
    
    awww. and i ma having them! ❤
    
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  7. Shadeau July 18, 20166:09 pm
    
    :):)
    
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Melinda Kucsera July 18, 201610:40 pm Reply

that’s the loveliest description 🙂

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1. rosemawrites July 19, 201612:19 pm Reply
  
  and still conservative, eh? HAHA
  Thank you dear Mel!!!
  
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  1. Melinda Kucsera July 19, 201610:25 pm
    
    nah, just lovely 🙂 You’re welcome
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 19, 201611:45 pm
    
    Haha. Thank youuu!!
    
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  3. Melinda Kucsera July 20, 20169:43 pm
    
    🙂 You’re welcome 🙂
    
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  4. rosemawrites July 21, 20169:56 am
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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