Melodious

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Melodious: A Miku*

Rhythmic sighs
and in sync heartbeats—
our first night.

©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.

Photo credit: Unsplash.com

Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)


Abbreviated Haiku is written in either 2 lines with syllable count 7/2 or 3 lines with syllable count 3/5/3 or 2/3/2. This is sometimes called Miku*.

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30 thoughts on “Melodious

  1. I like the photo. And the name Miku. More importantly, the verse is appealing. The alternate s and t sounds to me sound like passion as it happens. You recreate the rhythm of the lovers. Lovingly done, sister!

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