Scribe: A Senryu*
You’re the bloody words,
that colored my frozen skin,
as winter wind ends.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash.com
Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
The Senryu is:
- a poem in 3 lines or less.
- syllabic, 17 syllables or less.
- commonly written in 3 lines but can be written in 2 lines and can be written with fewer syllables, never more.
- L1 5 syllables describes image.
- L2 7 syllables, adds conflicting image or expands first image
- L3 5 syllables provides insight (the ah ha! moment)through a juxtaposed image.
- written as a natural human experience in language that is simple, humorous, sometimes bawdy or vulgar.
- presented with an energy or liveliness in the focus and choice of words
- often humorous
- written in the moment.
- an imagist poem (draws the humor from the image)
- untitled but can be #ed.
Pretty good one!
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Thank you, Alok!
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wow, deep and haunting, what a read to start my week with!
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yay! thank you, Mel! wishing you a productive week!:D
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Thank you and your welcome 🙂 I’ll try
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you can! 😀
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So much imagery and meaning!
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Thank you, Jade!
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Very chilling!
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yeah! just like the weather here in the Philippines! 😀
Thanks, PJ!
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Are you having tropical storms right now?
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yes dear. They have started coming…
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Oh no! Are they really bad?
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not yet dear. they’re just warming. the worst, sadly, is coming because intense typhoons usually comes between September to November.
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Does that mean you will have this typhoon type weather through November?
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yes dear. it can extend until December.
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That’s terrible! December.
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yeah.. it is! ❤ It's winter during December there, right? 🙂
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Ooooh. 👏👏👏👏👏
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geeez. i am loving those ooohs and applause, Sarah! 😀
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😊😊💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Strong wording. Bloody on frozen skin. Creates all kinds of chills. Great work!
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yaaaay! glad the chills happened! 😀 thank youuuu!
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I LOVE this!
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oh thank you, Greta!
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❤️
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Oh Wow–Fierce, Rosey!! So good!
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yay! thank you, sissy Stella!
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Most welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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Excellent
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thank youu! 😀
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