Illicitous: An Imayo*
Blurred eyes missed your intense gaze, as I come near you.
Your face’s illicitous look, reveals your soul’s crooked.
Your dark eyes take off my clothes, but I keep my stance.
I know my womanhood’s worth, you’ll ne’er stand a chance!
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
It seems that whenever I research a Japanese form, it involves an alternating 5-7 or 7-5 syllabic structure. The Imayo (present style) of the 12th century is no exception. This form creates long lines broken by caesura separating 7 and 5 syllables in the line.
The Imayo is:
- a 4 line poem.
- syllabic, written in 12 syllable lines broken by caesura after the 7th syllable.
Ooh, sexy, strong, fierce! Loved your poem ❤
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yaay! love the sexy comment. i rarely have such in real life. hah! 😀
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LOL! I find that hard to believe with your poetry!
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my poetry is sexy, not me though. HAHA. thanks, Jade!
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Ah, Bravo! 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Thank youuuuuu!
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Always! 💕
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❤
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What man would stand a chance?
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a man minus the illicitous look, i guess? 🙂
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LOL
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😀 😀 😀
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There You Go … Bravo !! Loved it ❤ ❤
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thank youuu! 😀
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Oh this is full of strength and powerful knowledge of self’s value–BRAVO!! I’ll have to look up the form, as I’m not sure what the caesura is 🙂
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Oooh. Caesura is a break, sissy. You can break a sentence by using a comma. 😉
thank you for your lovely words, sissy!
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Thanks, Rosey–I did look it up; I think the word Caesura just made it sound harder to me than it is! I’m such a nervous-nelly sometimes 🙂
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HAHAHA. Me too! Caesura is such an intimidating term!
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It was funny when I looked it up…and all I saw was commas!!
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haha. yeah. just comma! 😀
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:):)
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Strong words, sister. Perfect message. I’d like everyone to get this!
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yaaay! thank you, brother!
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