Ethereal: An Endecha*
our earth’s ethereal facade
made of seasons’ artistry,
fades out before my two eyes
when it ate your body wholly, including me.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thanks, Sarah!)
The Endecha is a ” The Canción triste que encierra un lamento”, (“sad song that locks up a moan”), a 16th century Spanish dirge or song of sorrow.
The Endecha is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, written with 7-7-7-11 syllables per line.
- rhymed, rhyme scheme xaxa xbxb etc., x being unrhymed. The rhyme is often consonance only but true rhyme may be used.
Lovely….. 🌷
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thank you, Vikey!! 😀
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Truly loved this piece. “Seasons Artistry” is such a good line
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thank you, Shaun! they are GREAT artists right? 🙂
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💖
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awwwww. that’s too much!!
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😊😊💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Excellent
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thank you! 😀
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Loved this, and learned a new word!
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thank you, dear Sheridan!
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beautiful and yet fatalistic, somehow you balance the two in this short piece. *shakes head in wonder*
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Oh dear. you’re giving me too much credit! 😀 Thank you!
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Beautiful and powerful…and I’ll have to pass on the form, looks too much 🙂
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awww. thank you sister! ❤ No worries. 😉
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Most welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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:):)
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Overwhelming feeling here, sister!
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yaaay! i bet overwhelming is a nice compliment. thank you, brother!
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I mean it as a compliment. It’s an impressive achievement, I think, to create such feeling in a poem.
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thank you, brother! 😀 really!
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