Malleable Heart: A Musette*
I’ll be
yours forever,
dearly.
Even
my soul’s flown to
heaven,
Even
bones are fin’lly
laden,
Until
words become all
futile,
Until
heart and mind are
docile,
I’ll be
yours wholly, my
only.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thanks, Sarah!)
The Musette is an invented verse form that presents the challenge of writing in very short lines. This form was introduced by Emily Romano and found only at Shadow Poetry. The Musette is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of tercets.
- syllabic, 2-4-2 2-4-2 2-4-2 syllables per line.
- rhymed axa bxb cxc etc. x being unrhymed
Ohhhhh myyyyy, I’ve fainted dead away…this is the most beautiful Musette, one of my fave forms. You are Brilliant, Rosey!!
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Oh dear! Come back my sissy! Don;t be dead! 😀 😀 😀
HAHA. Thank you dear!!! You’re so sweeet! ❤
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Hahahahahaha! Now you’re making me laugh!! You are SO welcome! How are you doing–exhausted??
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Hi my dear! Happy monday to you! 😀
I am feeling better today. Still busy but boss was not able to scream at me today bec she’s sick. But she still said I did something wrong but.. I just let it go. ❤
How about you? 🙂 It's happy 4th July to you, dear! ❤
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Oh I’m so bad–I actually laughed with glee that the boss is too sick to scream at you!!! Happy Monday–I’m praying for you to have a mega-blessed week!!! And yes, it’s July 4th for us…but I’m sad that it’s so cloudy we may not be able to see the beautiful fireworks show…I can hear the “booms”, but want the pretty starbursts. Oh well, that’s life 🙂
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AWWWW. Hey clouds, come on! Move and let my lovely sister see the beautiful sky lights! Come on. Move now! 😀
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Hahahahaha–you’re so cute, and I hope they listen!!! The “booms” in the neighborhood are starting to get to me…but the televised program will start in 20 minutes, so I’m hopeful of seeing starbursts over the water!
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Yaaaay! 😀 At least you can still see them! ❤
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🙂
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Beautiful
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oh thank you! 😀
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owww so cute.
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yaaay! Thank you, Hemangini! ❤
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Beautiful and very touching!
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awww. thank you dear!
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Love the rhyming here!! Well done!
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yay! this is quite tough to right! 😀
Thank you, dear!
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Ohh that’s beautifully written, Rose 🙂
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awww. thank you, Rohit!
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You’re welcome, Rose 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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A litany about the strength of love. I imagine this as a choral reading. Again, you speak to the spirit, sister!
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awww. a choral reading! that’s awesome! Thank you for finding the notes in my poem, brother!
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Aww you took my breath away, my dear! So kiliiiiiiiiiig ❤
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YAAAY! Thank you, dearie! 😀
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You’re most welcome, dearie! ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Awwwww… Hopelessly romantic!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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yeah! my dark writer is asleep at the moment! 😀
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😀 😀 😀
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That’s a very cool form. You executed it perfectly to express such sweet sentiments. Your musette reads like a vow.
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awwww. a vow it is. (but not mine. not yet. HAHA) Thank you, Mel!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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