Why is it hard to accept,
the death of a child?
Is it because…
When you lose your husband,
you’re a widow;
When you lose you wife,
you’re a widower;
When you lose you parents,
you’re an orphan;
But when you lose a child,
what will you become?
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04.01.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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DISCLAIMER: My dear friend Vijaya of StrangeLander 2015 shared to my two beautiful pieces with almost the same words as this poem:
“A wife who loses a husband is called a widow. A husband who loses a wife is called a widower. A child who loses his parents is called an orphan. There is no word for a parent who loses a child. That’s how awful the loss is.”
― Jay Neugeboren, An Orphan’s Tale
and
“Brenda: You know what I find interesting? If you lose a spouse, you’re called a widow, or a widower. If you’re a child and you lose your parents, then you’re an orphan. But what’s the word to describe a parent who loses a child? I guess that’s just too fucking awful to even have a name.”
As a writer, I always try to honour intellectual properties mostly words from someone’s mind. I personally haven’t read these two lovely pieces but we somehow shared the same theme, a parent’s loss, hence we share almost the same words.
For my part, this poem is written and inspired by the story by the death of Courageous Caitie. She is a 3-year old Filipina who has been diagnosed with a very rare type of blood cancer. Her family flew from the Philippines to Singapore to have a concrete diagnosis, as no local doctors were able to identify her illness.
I actually posted about her death here. So there. No plagiarism, no bad intention was intended when I wrote and posted this piece.
God bless everyone.
Great poem. My sister has buried two adult sons and I can’t imagine the pain she endures everyday. My heart just breaks for her.
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Oh my. Oh my. My heart goes to her. It is indeed a pain no words can describe.
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It’s a feeling that never goes away and I speak from personal experience. A really difficult journey.
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Owww. *hugs*
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Hmm, that’s a difficult one to answer.
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That is true, Alok. Thank you!
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That’s a very true poem and question, one that I think many have pondered and the general consensus thus far is that we have no word for such a tragedy because it is unnatural for a parent to have to bury their child 😦 It truly is one of the Life’s most heartbreaking events.
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Yes, Jade. That is the word, unnatural.
Thank you, dear!
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You become an empty woman.
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that is true, Mia. Thank you for reading!
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Devastated/ Great write.
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Oh thank you very much!
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Um …
“A wife who loses a husband is called a widow. A husband who loses a wife is called a widower. A child who loses his parents is called an orphan. There is no word for a parent who loses a child. That’s how awful the loss is.”
― Jay Neugeboren, An Orphan’s Tale
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Hi Vijaya! Thank you for sharing this. I personally haven’t read this book or this quote and thank you for informing me.
I wrote this poem when a three-year old child with a rare leukemia died. I have been praying for her and her family and been following their battle on facebook. I even posted about her death here: https://areadingwritr.wordpress.com/2016/03/31/hearts-voice/.
So she and her parents are my inspiration for this one. Not the piece that you shared because I haven’t read it ever. Nonetheless, thank you for sharing and I may take down this post to avoid unnecessary conflicts. Thank you.
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Thank you!
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Thank you, too! ❤
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So sorry to hear about that. Alas, that quote is not just in the book (which I haven’t read. It’s everywhere, in the air, which is why I think it was not intentional on your part. I’ve seen it in many places.
Thanks for understanding. I didn’t want you to have any trouble about that.
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Yes, I still feel sorry for her family especially for her mother.
Thank you, too, for sharing, Vijaya. At least I know. ❤
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I knew you would understand, because I know you honor people’s copyright. I see you doing that all the time – acknowledging people’s work. That’s why I thought it important to mention this.
You rule, girl! Love to you!
Vijaya
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Thank you, Vijaya! 🙂 I appreciate it. 🙂 I somehow made a note about it. 🙂
Love back to you, Vijaya! Thanks again! ❤
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This is so poignant, and I’ve heard a woman whose daughter was murdered say the same thing–there’s no name/title/word for that hugely significant loss.
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yes. it is like a hole no one can ever close, ever. thank you! ❤
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I gather this poem is somewhat personal to you. Are you doing okay? The week is almost over… 🙂
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It is somehow personal when i wrote this. 🙂 It is inspired by a young angel. 🙂
Yes, sister. And I am thanking God that this hell week is over. ❤
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Oh my…. And I’m sorry, you poor darling–a “hell week” is not good at all…. xxoo
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Thank you very much, dearest sissy. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Tomorrow will be better <3<3
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amen! ❤
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Hallelujah!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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:):)
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🙂
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I can’t imagine the indescribable grief of losing a child and I hope I never have to find out.
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i will pray for that, PJ. That pain is truly one of the worst.
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Thank you Rosey! I never want to experience it!
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you’re welcome! 🙂 YEs. I don’t want to. ❤
have a lovely weekend, dear!
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Oh dear! As I come to think of it, I realized, actually there is no such word .. Its so very sad..:(
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yes.. maybe that’s how horrible it felt. no words can be able to justify the pain losing a child brings.
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True 😦
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Yeah! 😪😭
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Wow this poem hits the heart of the problem Sarn struggles with in Curse Breaker: Enchanted. You’re speaking to his greatest fear.
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ooooooh! wow! That is so great to know! ❤
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🙂 You read his heart
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yay! 😀
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🙂
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There’s no answer. You just learn to live with the broken pieces of your heart. Talking from personal experience.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Jacq. Indeed there’s no answer. ❤ *hugs*
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