Half

Posted on June 29, 2016June 28, 2016 by areadingwriter

I’ll miss
being half
of two,
most of all,
I’ll miss
being half
of you.

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04.2016
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43 thoughts on “Half”

Priceless Joy June 29, 201610:26 pm Reply

Ooohh, this is so sweet and beautiful, yet sad because it speaks of a breakup.

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 20169:55 am Reply
  
  yes my dear. sorry about that! but thank you for saying it is still beautiful! ❤
  
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  1. Priceless Joy June 30, 201610:12 am
    
    It is beautiful! (Sad because of the breakup).
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 201610:14 am
    
    awww. that is true. thanks, PJ! 😀
    
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jademwong June 29, 201610:53 pm Reply

Ohh this is equally wonderful and terribly sad 😦 Your words are so simple, your poems so concise, and yet the emotions you always manage to convey are outstanding, Rosema.

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 20169:53 am Reply
  
  Oh wow! your words are a delighted to have, Jade! Thank you! 😀
  
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clcouch123 June 30, 201612:34 am Reply

Such a sad, lovely poem. Sister, you write with great heart!

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 20169:59 am Reply
  
  Awww. Thank you, brother! 🙂 I try to always do that! 🙂
  
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  1. clcouch123 June 30, 20161:13 pm
    
    And you succeed! Sister, I hope you’re having a good week.
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 20166:26 pm
    
    Thank you, brother. I am afraid I am not. But I am getting by.
    
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  3. clcouch123 July 2, 20162:58 am
    
    Sister, I’m sorry to hear that your week has not been good. You deserve so much goodness in life. Which doesn’t mean a lot, my just saying that. But it’s what I wish–and pray–for you.
    
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  4. rosemawrites July 2, 20163:22 pm
    
    Thank you brother. We may not appreciate the good days if we don’t have bad ones. 🙂
    
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thesarahdoughty June 30, 201612:50 am Reply

Awww

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 20169:59 am Reply
  
  awww., thank youuuuuuuu!
  
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  1. thesarahdoughty June 30, 201611:01 am
    
    Of course! 😊
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 20166:30 pm
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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FLYLēF | Lonna (guest reviewer) June 30, 20161:50 am Reply

Awww…So sweet! I like how I can see this from multiple POVs: epic sister bonds, mother/child, and of course the couples.

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 201610:01 am Reply
  
  oh wooow! that’s a wonderful way of seeing this piece, Lonna. 🙂
  
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  1. FLYLēF | Lonna (guest reviewer) June 30, 201611:08 am
    
    So glad my interpretation/perspective is not too left field. =) You’re poetry is beautiful. ❤
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 20166:27 pm
    
    aww. you are just so sweet dear! ❤
    
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Josslyn Rae Turner June 30, 20162:36 am Reply

So sweet! 🙂

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 201610:00 am Reply
  
  and so sad? HAHA.
  Thank you, Joss!
  
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  1. Josslyn Rae Turner June 30, 201610:01 am
    
    Yeah, that too! 🙂
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 201610:16 am
    
    thanks, Joss! 😀
    
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  3. Josslyn Rae Turner June 30, 201610:28 am
    
    You’re welcome! 🙂
    
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  4. rosemawrites June 30, 20166:33 pm
    
    ❤
    
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Shadeau June 30, 20165:25 am Reply

Lovely…and very sad.

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1. rosemawrites June 30, 201610:13 am Reply
  
  awww. thank you dear! ❤
  
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  1. Shadeau June 30, 201610:22 am
    
    Most welcome always ❤
    
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  2. rosemawrites June 30, 20166:35 pm
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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  3. Shadeau July 1, 20166:13 am
    
    ❤
    
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thelonelyauthorblog July 1, 20167:01 am Reply

Awesome. These are the kind of love writes that I adore.

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1. rosemawrites July 1, 20169:36 am Reply
  
  awww. thank you! 🙂
  
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Srivi July 2, 20164:31 am Reply

Here strikes, the ‘Queen of dark poems & heartbreaks’ …
As I have made it clear, I love this side of yours… You are simply outstanding, Rosema ❤

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1. rosemawrites July 2, 20163:33 pm Reply
  
  Oh dear Srivi! You are just so generous! ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you from the bottom of my sometimes dark heart. ❤
  
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  1. Srivi July 4, 20165:40 pm
    
    Well, I just stated the fact, dear 😀 You are the queen, indeed! ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 4, 20166:38 pm
    
    Then you are too! 😘😘😘
    
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Melinda Kucsera July 2, 20169:18 pm Reply

Oh no i hope you and your Beau are still together!

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1. rosemawrites July 3, 20162:27 pm Reply
  
  yes dear. this is fiction. 😉
  
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  1. Melinda Kucsera July 5, 201611:00 am
    
    big sigh of relief! 🙂
    
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  2. rosemawrites July 5, 201612:02 pm
    
    HAHA! Thanks, dear! 😀
    
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  3. Melinda Kucsera July 5, 201612:11 pm
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
    
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  4. rosemawrites July 5, 20163:06 pm
    
    ❤ ❤ ❤
    
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