Like a
screeching,
screaming,
speeding,
train,
you
hit me,
crushed me,
ripped me–
clothes
and
beyond.
—
03.26.2016
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Bullet Train
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thank you, Sarah for a round of applause! 😀
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You’re welcome!
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That last one wasn’t supposed to be a sad face.
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got it, Sarah! 🙂
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Whoa. Your poetry have all been so deep lately. Makes me wonder what’s going on in your real life, my dear 😉
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Oh thank you, Jade! Love the WHOA! 😀 Hmmm. I’ve written the pieces last March so maybe I am going through something that time. 🙂
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So painful. I don’t know what’s hit me, but I hurt all the same. You’re poetry eviscerates, my dear.
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Oh wow! eviscerate! Lovely! thank you, Lonna!
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WOW, extra fierce…hope everything’s okay. xx00, Sissy
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thank you, sissy! ❤ ❤ ❤ this was written last march. 😉
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Oh good, not a current crises ❤
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yeah. 😉
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🙂
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A stark and harsh metaphor. Since I’ve not been on bullet trains before, I can easily (imaginatively) fear them. An impressive, if disastrous, emotional collision depicted, sister.
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Haha! thanks, brother! I’ve never rode a bullet train, too. We have the slow versions here, though. HAHA
Thanks again!
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I think there’s a bullet-type train on the east coast. It seems to have many problems. I think I’ll stick with your poetic treatment with the train. More than scary enough (ha-ha)!
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hahaha. a great idea, then! 😀
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Whoa
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oh i love that Whoa! Thank you! 😀
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Well now, this is fascinating.
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oh dear. thank you! ❤
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Urgh! Clothes and beyond. </3
Great poem deariee. I missed inhaling your words…
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Yeah. which means? 😀
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Abusado na yang mga lalakeng yan! 😂
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HAHAHAHAHA. Hugot pa more! HAHA
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Love can indeed, hit, crush, rip us apart in a good way as well..At times, love is so powerful, that when it hits us, it leaves us stunned and confused as to what’s happening around us.. But at the end, it leaves one with an amazing feeling 😀 ❤
Loved this speedy, ripped up take on love ❤
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WOW! Speedy and ripped up. That’s two awesome words, love! ❤ Thank youuuuu very much!
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My pleasure ❤ ❤
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