Words’ Evolution

june 22

I was once
a friend
of flowery
hopeful
cheesy
tales.
But when you
left me
with nothing
but my pen,
my words
begun to
bleed.

03.22.2016
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51 thoughts on “Words’ Evolution”

    1. “I find the joy that comes after pain is tougher.”
      That is so true. I tend to feel the same way! 🙂

      HAHA. That lizard, i would never dare to touch it in reality. 😀
      Thanks, brother!

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  1. Wow…the imagery of those few lines. I see red, hot, passion…and a tiny bit of fury. I’m all sweet but I have a mean streak too. Ask my two sons.

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  2. I can feel a similar theme between “morphine” and “pain revolution” – sadness bleeds through pen or words.
    p.s. happy again it is fiction 🙂 🙂
    🙂 Dajena ❤

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    1. Yes darling Dajena! You are right! I think I am quite sad when I wrote those two poems. 😀 And the coming poem will have the same theme as well. (I think I wrote these three poems in one sitting, hence the same theme.)
      Thank youuuu darling! It is fiction. 😉

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